Reviews for The monster awakened
lizziecats chapter 5 . 2/4
i really like this story, I can't wait for the next update!
I find this story really interesting, I want to learn more about Shanks daughter and her powers. Also I hope to see more development in the relationships she has with her father and the crew since I love when the crew because close knit like a real family only better lol

I also hope that as she gets older she will be able to fight along side her dad and prove herself to be her father's daughter lol But I also like scenes where the girl gets hurt whether by fighting and getting wounded or taking an injury to protect another. I would like to see her get hurt or sick because I would love to see the reactions we could get from shanks and the crew!

Anyway great story and I can't wait to read more :)
Christmasloot chapter 5 . 3/17/2013
Leader tone. I never though Shanks of all people would have one.
spiritgirl16 chapter 5 . 3/17/2013
Awesome chapter, interesting fruit power the weight-weight fruit curious to see more update soon pls!:)
Christmasloot chapter 4 . 3/13/2013
Update soom hm? Yeah. Good. However, I've a question. Is Hao the same age as Luffy?
spiritgirl16 chapter 4 . 3/12/2013
Yay, an update!Aww shanks is such a good dad bringing his daughter along on such a dangerous tripx3
One of the reasons I love him so much:3
Update soon pls!
rion-rion chapter 3 . 3/7/2013
so this is haoshoku power, it makes the story even more interesting!
I love the end "dad?" - "yes sweety" - "what do we do now?", it was the perfect way to end this chap, good job :)

I'm waiting to see a new update! good luck

Ps: for the layout, I would like to advise you to go to the line in your dialogues, put dashes and all. It would be easier to read ;)
spiritgirl16 chapter 3 . 3/6/2013
Interesting:) Will there perhaps involve a love interest later on, or no? either way i await an update:)
rion-rion chapter 2 . 3/5/2013
What a great start! It seems promising :)
I love stories with shank's daughter, and yours is original with her being a weapon, good idea by the way
I want to know what happened next so please keep going!

Ps: you drew beautifully shanks, he is perfect!