|Reviews for Own|
| dlhk chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
I loved this. It was so sweet. I hope you'll consider continuing it I really need more! :) -mommyofboth
| kdeishak chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Would like to see their relationship progress!
| IndigoIyse chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Absolutely loved this! would love to see it expanded. Glad to see you're back.
| kmfroggi chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Absolutely loved this!
| Skinnyj chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Love. Love. Love.
| onemorecup chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Wish this wasn't the end. Loved it. thanks
| Mell C chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Great story. Really like the backstory- very cool. Thanks.
| blueeyes11354 chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
So sweet. :)
| marigold123 chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
"But his eyes are green. Even in the dark I can see that. Reflections of flames flicker and dance in them, and for a moment, they're all I see." I loved this first glimpse of Edward. Oh and the opening paragraph...so visual!
I loved meeting these characters and reading Bella's feelings. My only disappointment is I wish there was more! (Even though you said this was long!) Thank you for writing.
| Kate714 chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
I really missed your writing. I love the anticipation in your stories. I really wish this story had more to it. I love it!
| pnkats chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
That was so awesome!
| Solenoidbelle chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
argghhhh the romance! Please more! I loved it!
| Hadley Hemingway chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
oh my dear...teary eyes-check. thudding heart-check. fluttery stomach-check. What a lovely, lovely story. I am not a o/s fan but, from you, I'll read anything. Thanks so much for bringing that piece of delightful romance into my afternoon and making me fall head over for Edward and Bella once more. I've missed your words...but the constant and consistent quality of your writing never fails - I couldn't love this one more, dear one. xo
| JessaCloud chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Gah! And everything you write owns ME! Please make this a multi-chapter fic! PLEASE! Oh I can't bear to think this is all there is of this- it's simply too good to stop there, but if there really won't be more it is of course absolutely delicious as it is. I'm just terribly greedy when it comes to your words ;) xo
| BLilTXgirl chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
What a wonderful story! That was such a cool twist about them having saved each other at different times in their lives.
I was really happy to see Jake and Bella be able to end things without a lot of drama and hurt or anger.