|Reviews for Victory|
| KaramelKat chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Still my all time favorite Bella/Leah story.. Best one ever!
| White chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
This was literally one of the funniest things I've ever read, loved it! XD
She who can't be asked to log on, HazardLovesFrosties
| liragreen chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
Ha! At least Leah was able to get a little revenge for all Bella put her and the pack through. And maybe this is a sideways gift to Bella-throughout all of the books, she never had to learn from her mistakes or accept the consequences of her actions.
SM's biggest flaw (well, despite her limited vocabulary and lack of writing talent) was the fact that she was too in love with her characters to hurt them. While it made a happy ending for everyone, that all-inclusive happy ending made for a very unbelievable set of events and weak characters.
I love how you gave at least Leah a backbone.
| HalcyonSeasons chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
I had the most victorious smile on my face...
I'm so glad that happened! The entire time I was wondering if Leah was really going to do something crazy. I kept thinking, "Oh god, what if she just bitches her out again?" And then when I saw that wasn't happening, I was thinking she was going to straight up kill Bella, which would have started a riot. But a ripped-off arm? A-plus. Justice was very much so served. Awesome job.
| InaV chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
I hated how everyone was walking on eggshells around Bella and loving her, even despite her being stupid, aggressive and egocentric from the first to the last page of the books. Your Leah did what I wanted to be done for so long... And it's the least she could do. It was creepy that Jake imprinted on the baby, but it was not his choice. And poor Seth. No one really saw Bella for the crazy newborn that she was, even in that moment, but they treat her as if she is like the rest of the vamps. Someone had to do something, so: "Go Leah" :)
| Fred the Man chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Leah is a bit full of herself, is she not? She ripped the arm of someone is not trying to fight her or make an attempt to seriously defend herself. IF Bella had made a serious attempt to defeat herself, Leah might not so full of herself right now. Yes, she had a right to be mad about Seth, but it was not like Bella deliberately tried to injury him. Seth did attack Bella, she acted on instinct, defended herself. I get Bella's anger about Jake, a guy who spend years trying to get into her pants, now putting those feelings on her newborn daughter. Mother's instinct to protect her child from creepy Jake. The imprint is not a good enough excuse for me, given how much Jake sniffed around Bella, long before Renesmee was born.
| jace4ever chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Hell yeah Leah! I am so glad to see someone give her what she deserves a damn good ass whooping. I cant stand her or the fact that Jacob was put off on her daughter. That was just so wrong. Jacob is an alpha and meant to destroy Vampires not be in love with one. As for Bella I could not stand her and was so hoping he would realize how selfish she was, how much she used him. She was neither 'Best friend' or any friend at all to him. She cared for noone but herself not Jacob, charlie, edward, any of the Cullens, or the pack. She only cared about being beautiful, immortal, and becoming a vampire. Thanks for giving Leah a say cause you know her character would have given Bella just what she deserved.
| nemesismile chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
You hit right in the spot. When I was watching the movie and Emmett was like "This should be good" and I was giggling and thinking the same thing until she hurt Jake and Seth. I was like "Hell no." I mean, really bitch?
This os is really cool. I think it was ooc for Leah to not attack Bella tbh. Not only she's super-protective of Seth but she doesn't like Bella, even less vampire Bella. I think it should have been a moment when she snapped. Too bad we can't have consequences when it comes to Bella, who's not allowed to fall and learn from her mistakes.
| ctwinter chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
Love this! Leah the Avenger who holds Bella accountable.
| dramaqueen452 chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Awesome! I hated howBella beat up Jake. I was like 'what?!' As if he wld just stand there
She shld hv cointed herself lucky
| Ice Moon 14 chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Yep i know this is what Leah would have done (:. When i saw that i got so angry.
I really like this alot (:
| Firefly-class chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
| Sunshine-Midnight123 chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
I love this! This totally could've been a scene in the movie!
| Jessy Rhian chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
YES. Brilliant! This is exactly what Leah would have done :D xx
| Blue-10-Spades chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Justice served :)