|Reviews for The Decision|
| Onee-san chapter 10 . 3/14
I love this. First time I've stumbled upon it. I read both arcs and I'm hooked, I have to say. I'm confused by the ending of this one though. It doesn't feel complete, and I'm not sure if that's because a third is coming or the story itself is still being worked on. I hope you intend to continue this. I'd love to see how Jo and spock interact later on, and the whole creepy McKenna thing from the first one is still bugging me. I know in life we don't often get resolution, and I get the feeling you like to write about life, but I can dream right?
You captured the voices of the characters very well. The only person who I struggled with was Jim, he was a lot more brash than I'm used to, but that can be explained with AOS vs TOS (the question is which one was he here LOL). I was also pleasantly surprised with human Spock. You captured his voice and mannerisms very well, I think.
Thanks for writing. I'll have to check out your original work. You're pretty fantastic. :)
| El Shaddoll Construct chapter 10 . 5/16/2016
I really love both arcs to this story and I would love to see more as well. Your writing style is simply captivating and at times beautiful. Congratulations on your career in the real world, I have recently purchased your first novel and I hope you continue to find success. Keep up the great work!
| Genibane chapter 10 . 4/24/2016
Love this series! I hope you'll consider finishing it someday!
| anon chapter 10 . 9/20/2015
Hey, I just wanted to say that I really, really, love this story. Really. You're such a great writer. Did you abandon it? On your profile it says it will be the last fanfiction work you will finish? Do not get me wrong, I love your published work! ;) So much! But I do love too your Spock, McCoy and Kirk, and I would love it if you would continue that - only if you have time of course or if you really want to write it...but it would make me very happy.
| tanseynz chapter 10 . 6/23/2015
Never liked Bones/Spock before, but this is very sweet and languorous. Jo's a bit of a card too.
I hope your life is putting itself back together. It won't be the same, mine changed when my dad died, but different isn't always worse.
| Anon chapter 10 . 4/21/2015
I miss your fanfics so much. They were always special. Your portrayal of Spock, Kirk and Mccoy is one of the best in the whole fandom and your stories - all of them - where so special. I came to like Star Trek - truly love it - because of your work and I thank you for that! I wish you good luck with your published books, because such talent deserves to be read by the world. I am a tiny bit sad too that probably now you won't have much time for fanfics anymore. But I thank you for those fanfics you wrote in the Star Trek fandom and shared with the world! I thank you so much.
| anon chapter 10 . 9/14/2014
God, I still love that story so much. I love your original work too and buy all your books but this story about Spock and McCoy will always be my favourite of yours. Is there a chance that you will update it maybe? I am dying to know how it will continue!
| anon chapter 10 . 6/7/2014
I still do love this story very much. I hope you did not forgot about it.
| linlin chapter 10 . 4/27/2014
God, dear, I love this verse so much. Flawless writing. Flawless characterization. Flawless story. Your Spock and McCoy are perfect. If you ever would publish this amazing piece of writing, I would buy dozens of it. I'm sure I'm not the only one.
| Crack Muse chapter 10 . 4/21/2014
So I just had to read through this again because I missed it.
Still heart it every damn time!
| anon chapter 10 . 3/16/2014
Reread both of your fics - a temporary madness and the decision today - and dear, it gets better the more often you read it. Looking forward to more, if you have time.
| anonymus chapter 10 . 2/11/2014
Thank you for your update despite you having still such a difficult time. I still adore your Spock so much - your portrayal of him and McCoy is flawless. And ohh it is great to see that McCoy can also be very gentle with his Spock. Quite interesting take on the characters - my favorite characterization of them so far - true to canon but still - they have something unique when you are writing them. I cannot wait to read more. I really cannot. I hope this story will be still a long one and that we will get to know more about their life together. This is so perfect.
btw I - after all this chapters of kind of domestic bliss - that soon there will happen something bad.
| Syby chapter 10 . 2/7/2014
this chapter was perfect in every sense of the world. I am glad you still post more chapters in this wonderful Spock/McCoy verse. It is brilliant and since I read your story's I cannot see Spock and McCoy portrayed in any other way. Thank you again for sharing this wonderful piece of writing despite your personal difficulties - you are a wonderful person and I wish you the best in the world.
| Crack Muse chapter 10 . 2/5/2014
Hi - review time again!
I missed these two, a lot. Misesed your bang on interpretation of Leonard's personality and Spock's smackdowns or epic sarcasm.
mmmm the "darlin'" yes, I'm alredy melting back into this story. I really love it.
Oh ouch, not the best idea Spock - heat stroke in leathers... :s
But...leathers. *brainmelt* gluhlarg *drool*
Bones, you are unintentionaly getting him naked here, and whilst I'm enjoying it (fuck am I enjying it!) somehow I think this will lead to inadvertant sex.
Misread "slacks" for "socks". Clearly my brain has decided what side of the fence it wants to be on today LOL!
Aaaaaaaaand we have kissing! YES. Day made. I love how Mccoy just manhandles the shit out of Spock and he lets him. Well I suppose Spock doesn't "let" him do anything, he just tolerates the manhandling for a certain amount of time and Bones seems to instictively know his limits :D
Spock - hurry up and move in with Leonard - then you won't have to worry about the bloody neighbours!
"Since you bent that fine ass over a pool table at Harry's and handled a cue like a rent-boy off the docks" 1: ALL THE YES FOR THIS STATEMENT, SO TRUE. 2:McCoy has one helluva way with words doesn't he? XD. 3: Like Spock didn't know EXACTLY what he was doing!
Bones totally doesn't care what Spock does after he's sorted him, he's comfortable, cooled down, got his inhaler, all good. I love that little bit of their relationship once McCoy's certain Spock's good, a cursory check and then "go ahead, we're good."
Leonard you kinky bastard, forgot how you liked stuff like this! got one helluva public kink hasn't he!
Totally mean to get sex as soon as Spock came in the door, just unconsciously preparing him for it I wager :P
Okay yes, I'm done.
Welcome back, and THANKS! Feel free to post more whever you can!
| Doni chapter 10 . 2/2/2014
That was just beautiful. Thank you for sharing.