|Reviews for The Further Adventures of the Genki Ronin Soujiro|
| Norimune chapter 4 . 5/27/2004
Very good story. Watch run-on sentences. update soon!
| Eiko chapter 1 . 4/16/2003
Sound as though he's in modern NYC! How'd he get to the good ol' US of A? And, uh, he thinks like a person in a Stephen King novel (in parens like this, but often with no punctuation or capitalization), which is neat, 'cuz he's a good author.
| ChaosGhost chapter 4 . 4/9/2003
this wont be a scary review...
1) great plot! soujiro time travels! i'm waiting as to how he will get back and how/why he was sent to the future!
2) only thing that annoys me are:
a)some wrong spelling... we're not immune to it though..
b) the "I don't know, just be careful, ok." the 'just be careful, ok.' should be somewhere around 'ok?' or sumthin...
c) 'and i see you in the morning ok?' part... it should be something near to 'i'll see you'
just some minor issues that might not affect your cool fic...
Just continue this fic, and i might forgive you for your rare errors.
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/25/2003
interesting, sappy, funny romance story.
| BoUnCiNgMoOgLeOfDeLiGhT chapter 3 . 11/25/2002
KAWAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII! Love this!
| AryKoneko26 chapter 2 . 10/13/2002
Come on! Can you please make the next chapter! I read both chapters a LOOOONNNGG time ago. I am Soujiro's soulmate, so I deserve to se what comes next. Ja'ne!
| MaJiKaL P-NOi chapter 1 . 8/20/2002
it has a good start...but its rather short, either way i like it.
| Seta-Yukiko chapter 1 . 8/12/2002
More Kudasai! _