Reviews for The Cullen Legacy
sweetpea909 chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
For someone so smart Bella really is not thinking this clearly I'm trying to figure what would make her think Edward would not want to be part of Ellie's life. I do not think Edward is he guy she is trying to play him to be cannot wait for more
edwardgirl27 chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
very good story so far, can't wait to read more
MDtwiwriter chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
No Ellie wasn't a surprise but the level of hurt that Bella is still harboring because of Edward's choices is a surprise. Whatever happened clearly devastated Bella enough to keep their daughter a secret and fuel her determination to destroy Edward's current life. Rose is right on so many levels. There can be no winners in this scenario including Ellie. Of course I don't know Edwards POV on any of this but it is hard to believe the two people we saw in London, in those early days, could turn into this...sad.

Thanks for updating.
CassandraLowery chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
Very intriguing. No, Elizabeth isn't a surprise; I figured that there was another member of the "Cullen Legacy" a couple of chapters ago. Why else would Bella be out for blood? ;)

I'm very much looking forward to the next installment. And of course, telling Edward will indeed backfire on Bella. I can't wait to find out how he left her after their weekend; obviously he played the "legacy" card like a wanker, but I want to see if he was really as detached as he seems. He's definitely going to want a relationship with Elizabeth (my daughter's name, BTW-love it!).

Fabulous story, m'dear-no surprise there, LOL!

xxxooo,
Cassandra :)
miss-jojo chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
Can't wait for more!
123Cancerian chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
bella does have a wicked plan, i am not sure if its going to work how she expects it to.
kink delia chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
I cant wait for more muahhhhh
MissBell29 chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
This story! Gah. It kills me.

Elizabeth wasnt a surprise but theres something else. Rose said something, and Bella cut her off. THATs what I want to know :P

AMAZING work.
Barbara29 chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
wow, story keeps getting better with each chapter.
AceSunshine chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
No surprises here. I just cannot understand what Bella intends to gain. For someone so smart she seems tone overstating his reaction to finding out he has a daughter. If he is that ambitious I don't think he is going to give in they easily and I also think he is not going to acknowledge his daughter. I have a feeling this is going to blow up on her.
reader83 chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
Nope, not a surprise at all. Though, I'm getting more and more curious about this "lie" Edward told her, and what makes her think that Edward would want to be a dad to Ellie...

See you next time!
Denny52 chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
No surprise but I agree with Rose and everyone else close to her, she's not being rational but a scorned lover never is I guess. We still don't know how he lied and wronged her but it had to be awful for her to keep his child from him. I'm wondering if he's had someone investigate her since her threat to him and maybe got some pics of her and Ellie in England. That would make the meeting in N.Y. so much fun but I'm sure your plot progression is much, much better than mine. Can't wait.
Wheels2 chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
Wow, Bella really got hurt.
sherylb chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
All I can say is that this is going to be a long road before an HEA is in sight. So many variables- will Edward deny his daughter or want her? If he wants to be president, I don't know how that can happen if the public finds out about his daughter. This is so sad for Bella(Elizabeth, too-she must wonder about her father).
RoseArcadia chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
Damn!
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