Beautiful story

WHAT A FUN YET REALISTIC STORY. LIVVY IS THE BEST

Look up selfish in the dictionary and whose picture will be there - ROSE

Edward is a great father and is trying to do right by his daughter and I love his character. Bella and her choice for the future we shall see.

That was beautiful! Kinda heartbreaking too in places. I just wish we had one more chapter with a snapshot of what happened next. Thank you for sharing your lovely story with us all to read :)

Really enjoyed reading. Would love to read more. Thanks for sharing.

I really enjoyed the 3 chapters posted so far! Thank you for sharing your story with us. Can’t wait for more.

It’s good that Bella got along with his folks. Rose is do thoughtless. I don’t blame Edward for being upset.

Awww. I’m glad it sounds like she’s not afraid of a child

Love this

Found this being recommended over at TLS. Glad I found it. Left me wanting more.

Thanks for sharing.

Such a cute story. Loved it.

Yay, he’s going to learn how to braid. I’m so glad they talked and fixed things between them. Well, they were not broken, it was her parents. They were abhorrent people. So condescending and rude. I get that they were thinking of Bella but, you just don’t talk to someone that way. Especially when you learn later on that Bella told them she was in love with him. Absolutely disgusting behavior. I’m glad Edward told her he was staying away from them for the foreseeable future. No closure on the Rosalie part of the story. Maybe she is stepping back into her old habit of only seeing her daughter every few months. Sad. Poor Olivia. I liked the ending because, Edward got his new couch. The one he saved so long for. What an accomplishment. I really liked how Bella told Edward how she saw him. Loving hard-working, protective and does the right thing because it is the right thing to do. I liked this short story. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us here. ~ChristyWIX

His parents did step up and help. The whole first year of Livvy's life. Which is wonderful. I really like that Edward and Bella are officially dating. Sexing it up whenever they get the free time to do so. Rose was really irresponsible in this. Seems it is a habit of hers. She did seem to accept Bella in her daughter's life. Hoping it stays that way in the third and final chapter. I really like that Bella and Olivia like each other so much. It good for her to have a woman figure around her other than her grandmothers.

I’m happy he is still getting college courses done, even one at a time. I’m surprised his parents didn’t step in and insist he get his education, with them helping with Olivia. Don’t know the whole story there though. They may not be able to afford to help him. Angela was very kind. I like her. Bella was really fun. Seems she’s had a crush for a while now. I’m glad they’ve connected. She may be able help Livvie with braids even. Rose is a piece of work. Sad he hasn’t got complete legal binding rights over their daughter. Seems with her being so flaky, he’d have an easy go of it. Have full parental rights over her does not equal Rose never seeing Olivia. It just gives Edward the full parental right over everything Livvie.