Reviews for PewDiePie Lucius
dave and bob chapter 2 . 4/24/2014
mk it now!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/9/2014
It would funny if there was a part where one of the maids or someone was like "why does this kid keep calling himself 'Pewds'?" XD
Guest chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
Love this, but you have to start a new paragraph every time someone talks. Sorry about being a grammar nazi, but the way you're writing this makes it hard to tell who's talking.

"Come here, Bengt, let's go kill Jovita!" He walked up to the red and white ball to pick it up.
"Lucius I can't play with you today" His mom said tiredly.
"WHAT? I don't want to play with you, bitch!"
"Lucius, what did you say?!"
Guest chapter 2 . 11/27/2013
"McMuffin" said Pewdie in a low voice
Prof. Dickinson chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
roseturquoise chapter 2 . 7/30/2013
This is just too bad ; even I enjoyed these "memories" of roleplay, I would have preferred a REAL story inspired from Lucius game :))) but anyway, thanks ! ('u')b
roseturquoise chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Loooooooool, I liked when Pewds commented the sex scene xD he really looked like a paparazzi :P :P :P
puzzlingnerd57 chapter 2 . 6/5/2013
Since I haven't seen the videos, it makes no sense to me, but cool idea! It would be even funnier if you did his co-op with Cryotic of Bloody Trapland. LOL!
PewdieLover13 chapter 2 . 6/4/2013
Guest chapter 2 . 4/25/2013
Very interesting story. I'll be waiting for the next chapter
RavenRebel911 chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
...ok, one: Pewds says "Wake up in the morning not giving a single f***." not "Waking up not giving a s***." And two: this entire thing sucks.
Meh chapter 2 . 3/21/2013
Semoka chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Your cool continue