Reviews for In His own Hands
Guest chapter 2 . 8/2
Oh gosh when you get back to this story, please take some time to remove all the in-text author's notes. They really, really ruin the flow of your story. I was about to click the back button on the whole fic because they were irritating me so much, but I decided to give you a second chance and check a few more recent chapters to see if you continued doing it. So far I don't see any so I'm going to keep going, but other readers aren't going to be as patient as me. It's important to have your first few chapters be as good as you can make them since they are what makes a reader decide to continue on.
Taai chapter 31 . 7/16
Sooo.. Where's the rest! I WANTED THE LEMON! You broke me T-T
Taai chapter 28 . 7/16
Thank you. That useless women is now gone and out of the way. Now let us get back to sasuke and naruto.
*_*
Taai chapter 25 . 7/16
It said fairy "tail" not fairy "tale"
I do that, I do it at school too.
It's awkward when people don't know Fairy Tail is an anime.
Taai chapter 6 . 7/15
"Well you're 'dog' looks like a fat horse"
Hahaha! I nearly died!
Riley Freeman chapter 31 . 2/5
Yall niggas are gay!
YukinaUzuha chapter 3 . 12/12/2014
Dear lord author san trying to give little ol me a heart attack? XD I could just picture myself in the bus, reading a book and then suddenly heading towards a tunnel all dark, and then some random guy is sitting next to me smoking nonetheless? XD I would probably shard myself XD
kiki2222 chapter 30 . 10/12/2014
I can't wait to read the next chapter.:)
KH freak 813 chapter 14 . 9/2/2014
Wow. Thanks Sasuke.
KH freak 813 chapter 13 . 9/2/2014
That sounds NICE! (:
KH freak 813 chapter 12 . 9/2/2014
What IS Naruto's new place?
KH freak 813 chapter 11 . 9/2/2014
Nice plot!
KH freak 813 chapter 10 . 9/2/2014
How unexpected! :O
KH freak 813 chapter 9 . 9/2/2014
What's going to happen?!
KH freak 813 chapter 8 . 9/2/2014
I wonder who they are?
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