|Reviews for Don't Screw This Up|
| ligersrcool chapter 22 . 11/8/2015
I think it's a great ending for a great story XD and I think I get BB's reference
| ligersrcool chapter 19 . 11/7/2015
That was an EXCELLENT battle scene! Ick, poor raven, I'm in pain trying to imagine how she feels!
| ligersrcool chapter 17 . 11/7/2015
Tense now are we XD
| ligersrcool chapter 16 . 11/6/2015
XD beastie wuuuuuuuves raven
| ligersrcool chapter 10 . 11/4/2015
Bye bye Rae Rae
| ligersrcool chapter 7 . 11/4/2015
I actually like the fact that it was robin for some reason
| ligersrcool chapter 6 . 11/4/2015
Love the cliffhanger, it makes people want to read more, and I love it. And the action was pretty good too!
Raven: why did I have to break my ankle?! Argh
Beast boy: *hugs*
*stuff blows up in the background*
| ligersrcool chapter 4 . 11/4/2015
Ha I would've paid to be able to do that
| ligersrcool chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
I think this is going to be a really cool fic
| LilLinkGirl chapter 22 . 10/27/2015
Nice I liked it :)
| Padlei Star chapter 3 . 11/28/2014
When I saw Aldous Huxley, I was thinking, "Oh, I'm reading his book Brave New World right now for English class," then I read the next three and I started laughing at the coincidence. I just wrote a paragraph about it, and by just wrote, I literally mean not even an hour ago.
| writing4evah chapter 16 . 7/1/2014
"I do the shipping of it so solidly."
I just loved that line! Your story is absolutely AMAZING. You capture the characters quiet well under the different circumstances, and your writing is quiet proficient. I can't wait to read more. I hope you continue writing these marvelous stories!
| Concolor44 chapter 22 . 6/16/2014
No, scratch that. EXCELLENT story. The only thing that I DIDN'T like about the whole saga was that Raven could have taken out Slade very easily at one point, and failed to do so. HOWEVER, I don't hold that against you because
#1: it is entirely canon that she would act the way she did, and
#2: she's young, and not fully practiced with her powers, so she doesn't usually consider combining them (to wit - she had him bound in her power, and could have flown straight up a mile or so and then just dropped him).
It's just that I hold such a stunning, virulent, all-encompassing HATRED for Slade, that any time he gets away in a story it pisses me off. That b stard needs to DIE.
Your exploration of this alternate-Raven's character had depth and power. She's got spunk ... TONS of spunk. I like her.
Gotta Favorite this.
| Concolor44 chapter 21 . 6/16/2014
So they "don't want to kill Slade"?
Really? Why? In the name of all that's holy, WHY don't they want to kill Slade? HE NEEDS TO DIE, DAMN IT!
| Concolor44 chapter 17 . 6/16/2014
Nothing like a little tension to speed things along.
Note that I said a LITTLE tension ... not the tsunami you just unleashed.