Reviews for Don't Screw This Up
AraelDranoth chapter 16 . 11/5/2016
I would've paid money to see him say "AUTOBOTS, ROLL OUT" and then realized his mistake.
AraelDranoth chapter 12 . 11/5/2016
Couldn't she just teleport? And there is a time discrepancy in this chapter. Two days is not all week.
AraelDranoth chapter 11 . 11/5/2016
Very nice stuff.
AraelDranoth chapter 10 . 11/5/2016
Again. I think this is a fantastic plot bunny but the pacing is unbelievably fast it's giving my whiplash.
AraelDranoth chapter 9 . 11/5/2016
Oh yeah... he deserved it (even if it made me wince).
AraelDranoth chapter 8 . 11/5/2016
I think there should be some serious shunning.
AraelDranoth chapter 7 . 11/5/2016
It's a good story but the pacing is unbelievably fast. I can't believe that this all happened over the course of one day.
AraelDranoth chapter 6 . 11/5/2016
Well done chapter!
AraelDranoth chapter 4 . 11/5/2016
Oooh la la.
AraelDranoth chapter 3 . 11/5/2016
... I will admit I had my reservations but I'm liking this fic so far.
AraelDranoth chapter 2 . 11/5/2016
Hmmm... curiouser and curiouser
AraelDranoth chapter 1 . 11/5/2016
I think this story has a lot of potential
ligersrcool chapter 22 . 11/8/2015
I think it's a great ending for a great story XD and I think I get BB's reference
ligersrcool chapter 19 . 11/7/2015
That was an EXCELLENT battle scene! Ick, poor raven, I'm in pain trying to imagine how she feels!
ligersrcool chapter 17 . 11/7/2015
Tense now are we XD
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