Reviews for A Family Affair
Mylisssa chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Great story. It left me wondering about Jasper and more about Bella's having wanted Edward for a long time. hmm... Continuing? Good luck with the contest. :)
archy12 chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Hm,that was quite I would like to know is-what has happened with Bella?Why was she so sad?
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
I love mutual confessions! I wonder what's going on with Jasper though?
princesspewo chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Cool story!
mustlovertp chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Oooh, how long is that? Maybe long enough for a few more chapters?

It was sweet, hot... Nicely done!

Good luck! xoxox
Nannyjojo chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Didn't realise it was on here too, I left my review on wordpress.

Would love to read more.
Bevey99 chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Really good. A nice stand alone, with a hint that there could be something more.
Thanks for writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Loved the comfort he offered her in that first encounter in her room. I found that to be a very real and believable basis for what follows. Nicely done!
Alterite chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Loved this Edward. Your descriptions were very visual and nice. I felt like I was smoking on the porch with him!
"If you need a lover, I will gladly show you what it's like to be worshipped." Amazing line! Who could ever say no to such an offer?
A. xx
Nocturnal Emissions chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
sooo sweet. Very hot too!
ParasiteGoddess chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Loved this! When the contest is over I hope you extend it :)
witchykitty1313 chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Awwww... they belong together!
dpennell007 chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
"My hands move without my permission..." I liked that line, and this story. Another good one.
Luvtwismut chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Loved this! Well written and the lemon was smokin hot!
Tinsley Warren chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
I liked this!

I had a feeling that she wanted him too from that hug.

I feel like this needs to go on. Why was Bella so upset? Why was jasper not with her? What's going on with her marriage...hmm.

If this were to continue I totally want to read it!

Glad Edward was there for her...and then some!
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