Reviews for Family Services
Darkangel0470 chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
i didnt know if i would like this as child protection are not always the best but i really loved it and found myself wanting to read more
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Ohh this was definitely a good story! I loved the connection at the end! I'm so excited Bella found her father! That's crazy that it ends with Bella and Edward being cousins! I'm so excited to see what happens with this!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Woah! So did not see that coming! Awesome way to end it...
southernpur-rica chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
mariga79 chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
ohhh please more!
TLammy chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
Enjoyed your story. Good luck with the contest.
Lost In Fanfiction chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
LOL, I love how they were all connected in the end. Great story :)
monicaalexr chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
omg I loved it
I hope you continue
erika shoval chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
I really love reading your OS, it was so good , I hope you'd make it a full story.
lovepotionsbrewer chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Very sweet story. Would love to know what happens next.
dreamiedreamer chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Great story, you should continue this storyline after the contest.
KhristenHartgrove chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
I love this and omg I really want this to continue.
Marie One chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
Great 1st part, poor Edward.
Wheels2 chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
Lol, good ol Charlie.
Mylisssa chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
I was thinking Charlie was going to be her father, but it somehow didn't click that Charlie being Edward's uncle would make them cousins! What a roller coaster. Great story. Bella was so lucky to have Edward!
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