Reviews for Family Services
fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Well well
beatles101 chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
this is a really cute story you should continue it as more then a one shot
frostedglaze chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
This better win! And be made into a story!
moniquecullen chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Damn! Didn't see that coming. Poor Edward . I'm sure Charlie will give his blessing when he hears how much Edward has been helping Bella .
lleighton chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Is there any chance you will continue this story? I really enjoyed reading it. I'm curious to know what happens to this budding family and if Charlie shoots Edward (just kidding).
kvgamble chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Loved it, i hope you continue.
Shades Of Purple84 chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
LOL hahahahahaha Too funny! Apart from minor spelling and grammar, this was sweet. Was very easy to read. I like the name River. tsk tsk on Renee! BAD MOMMA!
Alterite chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Lol at the last panic bit!
I must say I didn't expect something so sweet at a Forbidden contest! I really like it though. I think you have enough material here for a much longer story.
Very lovely!
A. xx
debslmac chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
:) love this. Please continue
Breese chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
O.o more? Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease.
TineSoes chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Pleaseeee continue this story! Is soooo GOOD! I really loved this story, good plot and well written..
hope1984 chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Excellent. I hope you consider continuing after the contest.
DawnsWhimsy chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
I love this story! I mean it was sad at first but things sure are looking up well except for maybe Edward lol
Deletemyaccount201 chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Hahahaha. Oh man. That last bit was hilarious. But hey, they're not blood related... It's still cool. This was amazing, so hope it's continued! :)
melissamary55 chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Love it and wow so much things and wow renee is such a bitch.
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