Reviews for The Sound of Steel Guitars on a Fallen Soul
dazzleglo chapter 5 . 7/22/2013
Great chapter.
sherylb chapter 5 . 7/22/2013
Well, shit! Way to ruin their engagement celebration! Charlie really is a clueless asshole! Good for Bella-he deserved that slap! I can't say anything bad enough about Leah and Jacob
darcy13 chapter 5 . 7/22/2013
You need to have a "family" in order to have a "family talk." In the last chapter Sue tells Bella on the phone that BELLA needs to get over her "disagreement" with Leah and Jacob. "DISAGREEMENT?!" Really? I hope Edward stays solely in Bella's corner during this ambush from these selfish, unremorseful (The line "Their faces showed no remorse" says it all), miserable people. I'm glad Bella slapped Charlie. If he is so concerned about her, how dare he come bringing Sue, Jacob, and Leah in tow. How dare he!

Can't wait for the next chapter!
jesigrl007 chapter 5 . 7/22/2013
OMG! Yes I think that was the right reaction...will wait for your next chapter...
twiclare chapter 5 . 7/22/2013
Loved Edward just taking control, but what on earth is Charlie thinking by bringing Sue, Jacob and Leah there? Crazy!
MDtwiwriter chapter 5 . 7/22/2013
Bella's emotions were just like her carnival ride, up, up, up and then down. What is Charlie thinking, "family meet"?
elaine67 chapter 5 . 7/21/2013
How dumb is charlie?
mommymac0508 chapter 5 . 7/21/2013
Holy snap I just read all 5 chapters I loved it Edward and his family came at the perfect time and now her dad has some nerve to come to her like that the fact he brought the two who hurt her just shows he doesn't put her first no one comes before your kids
Judyblue95 chapter 5 . 7/21/2013
I'm glad this story is back...I took quite a liking to it...
Flavia Ribeiro chapter 5 . 7/21/2013
Love how he proposed!
Twisted Musalih chapter 5 . 7/21/2013
Cant wait to read what happens next. Bella should of kicked Jacob in the balls and bitch slap Leah
DawnsWhimsy chapter 5 . 7/21/2013
Oh an engagement and trouble all in one night how exciting!
kaylie.miranda.75 chapter 5 . 7/21/2013
I can't believe charlie actually had the nerve to show up and with the rest of them! Please update SOON!
BelleBiter chapter 5 . 7/21/2013
Bring on the drama! This is better than a telenovela!
cutestkidsmom chapter 5 . 7/21/2013
Okay I read all 5 chapters! this is an awesome story. All your characters are awesome can't wait for more babe! xoxoxo
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