|Reviews for Months In A Year (The Times Of Fatherhood Series)|
| Swiftlet in the Cloud chapter 12 . 9/27/2016
Your writing throughout this entire collection was beautiful. I read it all late last night on my phone and so came back to review it today. There were some grammatical mistakes (the mixing of then and than) but overall, wonderful. The adorableness of the beginning chapters when Dick was young and then just the heartbreaking angst of the last few chapters really touch me deeply. I'm reading the last few chapters and see that Bruce is sleeping in Dick's bed because it smells like his baby boy, and I'm just like "Give Bruce back his son already, please!" Them finally making up this chapter and Bruce apologizing and telling Dick that "he's here" really warm my heart. And it made me kind of glad that I didn't find this when it was a work in progress because I don't know how I would feel if the pain of the last few chapters were spread out over months. ;p Anyway, thank you for a beautiful experience.
| Airenee chapter 5 . 5/6/2015
| xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 1 . 3/24/2015
| parkscaol.com chapter 12 . 7/16/2014
congratulations on this amazing collection of stories. You capture Bruce's decent into darkness after he pushed Dick away. Each chapter got darker and darker - just as my eyes filled with tears that finally fell. The 'baby' at the end was the perfect, crowning, touch; Bruce found the balls to confess his guilt and admit to the ONE person who means the most that he is loved. Bravo. Chris
| Ekly Valdur chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
Just read all twelve chapters on my phone during breaks at work, and came back on my computer to leave this review.
These were lovely little stories, and I really, really enjoyed them.
Some of it seemed a little OOC at times, but you could be drawing on sources I'm not familiar with.
I also wanted to let you know I saw quite a few grammar errors, typos, etc. You have real trouble with mixing up then and than.
But at the same time, those errors only stood out so much because the rest of the writing was at such a high standard! Just need to get back to basics a bit.
| Queen Sound chapter 12 . 2/12/2014
An amazing story! I really enjoyed it
| ZeldaIsis chapter 12 . 2/4/2014
This one was so sweet!
| ShoesSOS13 chapter 12 . 2/5/2014
Its kind of sad it ended. :') But I love it!
| piggythelaw chapter 12 . 2/4/2014
Ahhh! It's the end! It's been awesome following you on this journey! Loved the ending and last words!
| thwipthwipity chapter 12 . 2/4/2014
*cries* *wails* this was such a good "story" (would it be called that?)!
| viridianaln9 chapter 12 . 2/3/2014
I love it.
| Elyograg chapter 11 . 1/28/2014
I do the same things with inanimate objects. Like I would feel sorry for a wilted flower, cus it makes me feel like its sad. Then I would buy it, take it home, put it in some water and hope that being in a home like mine would make it feel happy. I've been like that since I was a kid, I know it's weird, but its just the way I am.
| viridianaln9 chapter 11 . 1/28/2014
Awww...I can't wait for the next chapter.
| ShoesSOS13 chapter 11 . 1/28/2014
I, too, feel sorry for inanimate objects, you're not alone. :) Jason is diffrent from Dick, but he's an awesome diffrent.
| piggythelaw chapter 11 . 1/28/2014
Not upset at all! Thanks for updating! I like how you called the bathroom the alibi! I shall say that now, cuz it sounds better! :)