Reviews for Nine in the Afternoon
emmettandme chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
WOW, that was interesting.
Cullen Mascot chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
Sweet. Can they eat pizza? Like next chappie?
kiwisrock chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Wonderfully passionate! Thanks so much!
Would live to read more about these two! Thanks
Aggie94 chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
Enjoyed... Wonder what is next. Meg
Danatech chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Beautiful! Love it!
dalma101 chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Beautiful. I hope will see what happens in the afternoon:)
angie671 chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
That was a really sweet story, thank you
Amazone3 chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
:)
emeralddahlia chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Awesome...
mrsm0803 chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Wow, that was amazing! I would love a BPOV ... I'll bet she's been watching him just as long and thinking many of the same things. Good luck in the competition :))
BeatrizBeltran chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
More please
Heatherl8367 chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
Fantastic! And I loved this so much...

"I realize I'm still fingering the side of her neck, still breathing her in and have no intention of stopping. If she let me, I would be this close at all times, showing her how good she makes me feel by making her feel good."

Gorgeous. :)
NKubie chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
I loved this and can honestly it's my favorite so far! I'm not even half through all the entries, but I really think this has a great chance.

I love Edward's rambling thoughts and he was really bold once he started taking some initiative. There was something about how they related to each other that just struck me as genuine. And I just wanted her to stay and she did. Perfect HEA because I imagined, like Edward did, that they'd have many years together ahead of them. :)

The writing was fluid and I didn't notice any errors. Wonderful!

Good luck!
jennayg123 chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Omg how perfect! I absolutely loved this and I hope you decide to continue it after the contest is over!
malleelee chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
How sweet. With out being minutely descriptive, these two people came alive. The story reminded me of the writing of O'Henry as a few momentous minutes in one's life are revealed. The ending portends of the future with all its possibilities. Much enjoyed. Thank you.
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