|Reviews for Trail of Blood|
| Guest chapter 9 . 21h ago
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/12
| Eri Shimizu chapter 9 . 3/5
Hello! I'm so so SO sorry for don't give your review before but the school don't give me time for do it.. Well.. I LOVE this chapter! I scream like a fangirl while I was reading this! It's so.. it's just.. so perfect! I feel all the emotion of Vio and Shadow, I blush, angst, joy and love in the same moment.. I feel the passion between them! I teleport into the story! In another words... It's perfect! No less... So, I'll be waiting for the next chapter. I hope to read you soon. Take care n_n
P.D: I wanna another story from you of this pairing! I'll read it! I promise!
(Sorry for my bad English, I only know the basic)
| Octopie chapter 9 . 2/15
Oh my god this chapter its
perfection. I LOVE YOU YOU'RE ACTUALLY MY FAVORITE MORE MORE I NEED MORE THIS IS MY FAVORITE CHAPTER *breathes heavily* THIS IS THE CUTEST ACTUALLY.
| FireStorm8888 chapter 9 . 2/14
I am soooo happy that updated what a wonderful chapter! Please update soon, and if it counts I would absolutely read an AU of an AU. It sounds interesting! Can't wait for the next chapter! Bye!
| ObscureNavyDusk chapter 9 . 2/13
Wow. Just wow. The build up of tension in this chapter was wonderful. Absolutely wonderful.
I can't really describe how your writing always affects (effects?) my own emotions, but it does.
And then the smut. Hell yes.
*gives you all the virtual cookies*
| FourSwordsAddict chapter 9 . 2/11
yes! about time those two got together this story is great!
| Anonymous chapter 9 . 2/11
*FLAILS ABOUT WILDLY*
I NEED MOOOAAAAR
THEY FINALLY DID THE FRICK-FRACK
IM CRYING TEARS OF JOY OVER HERE
| Fuzzyeyes6 chapter 9 . 2/10
Ok, first off, before I say anything else, I just gotta tell you, the minute I read my emails and saw that you updated, I did the following.
1. Blink slowly
2. slowly smiles - but quickly goes back to an emotionless expression
3. Takes a long, deep breath to calm myself down
4. Rolls my chair over to the centre of the room
5. Moment of silence.
6. A sudden, EXTREMELY LOUD, HIGH PITCHED FUCKING SQUEAL ESCAPED ME WHILE I FIST BUMBED THE AIR AND SHIT AND GIGGLED LIKE A MANIAC.
I've squealed over stories before, but your the first to make me do it to that extent. So, let me just give a moment of absolute respect as a calmly listen to my music... And I just burst into a fit of giggles. I'm insane, aren't I?You have no idea how fucking happy my inner fangirl is. She's jumping all around my mind squealing her lungs out over 10 times and more.
Now that I have written that little scene (which was hopefully humorous to a certain extent) for you, let's get to business. For every single word in... THAT, I was on the edge of my seat, back arched over the computer. Everything. was. just. so. fucking. perfect. how. the. actual. fuck. do. you. fucking. do. that? VBHJTNFJBVFSETHGRTET DERP. Only thing with words and crap is one of the describing sentences around the beginning I just found a bit odd. I scrolled up trying to look for it but I couldn't find it XP Oh well, nothing to much anyways.
Also, I WAS WAITING, FOR SHADOW - OR VIO, TO SAY I LOVE YOU. I MEAN, YES, HEATED KISSING AND NAUGHTY FUN STUFF IN BED IS VERY ENTERTAINING AND REALLY MAKES THE INNER FANGIRL (Btw the inner fangirl's name is Dilara. She said hi.) FUCKING DIE OF THE SQUEALS AND HAWTNESS, BUT I CAME HERE TO FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLL! I just hope they say it some time soon, PLEASE.
Also, as far as the smut goes, I never read it. Like, never. Only when I run out of T fics to read and it's just like "...Well, shit. Time to go looking for the lemons I guess...". So I can't really judge. But from the ones I HAVE read, this towers over them, by, like, 3 times as much at least. Being legit. 3 times as much. Girl, YOU HAZ GOT THE SKILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLSS! XD
OH, WE'RE GOING TO GET TO THE ORIGINAL SHADOW'S-A-MURDERER PLOT YOU SAY? PLEASE, DO TELL ME MOAR. XD I honestly LOVE crime and mystery. Actually, you got me into that crap LOL. But yeah, and as much as I love romance, BRING ON THE BAD-ASS ACTION BRO :D :D.
Also, for the idea of the Au for the AU (lolwut.) it sounds interesting and is definitely something I'd get around to looking at if you DID do it :3.
And with that, I end this probs-incredibly-long review. Bah-bye! XD
| Eri Shimizu chapter 8 . 2/1
Please continue it very soon! I love your story and I just discovered today. I fell in love with this, you're just an amazing writer! Please update soon!
| ObscureNavyDusk chapter 8 . 1/26
How do you write so well. How. I can't even put into word show good it is...
Aside from fangirling over your amazing writing, the mood of this chapter was so perfectly created that I felt more like an observer, looking into the lives of others, rather than simply being some random reader of an online fanfiction.
*collapses onto the floor because can not describe the sheer awesome any further*
| Kasstle Bellourm chapter 8 . 1/20
I'm crying. I'm crying. I'm cryyyinngggg. Oh Goddesses help me. So cruel Vio. So cruel. I'm ahhhhhhh. I'm so happy you posted again, that I'm not angry. I'm just sobbing instead. Ahhhhhh. Remedy this, oh please. Just write more. It doesn't even have to remedy my tears, just more of your beautiful word play, thats all I can ask for.
I love you. Ahhh, make the anxiety pain ennndddd.
I see what you mean by you aren't totally happy, but didn't want to write it over again. Hard time, nitty-gritty gets hard to write! I think the way it came off was just what it needed to be, its not totally pretty, but it shouldn't be when the subject matter is break ups and attempted confessions.
SPOILER, DON"T READ IF YOU HAVE YET TO READ THE CHAPTER:
Shadow said "Lie if you have to." Me thinks Vio did a spot of lying. But now I have a grand terror for what Shadow will do next. We do have a serial killer here, I doubt he's going to curl up and sleep this off. I just hope he doesn't get caught *casually bloodies knuckles raping on wood*
Can't wait for the next instalment, ya beauty!
| FireStorm8888 chapter 8 . 1/19
I love this story it's so cute and well written and full of murder
I just love it! Please update soon I reaaaaaally want to read more!
| fluffykittensatemypants chapter 8 . 1/12
That was amazing! Your such a good writer! And the feels! Their too much to handle! I loved it and i hope there's more soon!
| DriedFrupcakes chapter 8 . 1/3
First off: curse you. Curse you for ending this in the worst (best) place possible.
Joking aside, this was another excellent chapter. I particularly like how you can sneak similes and metaphors into your prose as a way of subtly adding character; I think this chapter in particular spoke volumes about Shadow, and they definitely helped. His personality and little asides helped flesh him out, especially his internal reactions to nearly every little thing Vio does. It must say something when the chapter itself had little actually occur, was lengthy and yet still told me everything it needed to.
Nicely done, I await the next chapter with heavily baited breath.