Reviews for Raw
Moonlitfaith chapter 1 . 8/13/2016
Unbreakable Starfleet. I love the parallel to the brokenness she feels internally.
skadoo chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
This is B'Elanna condensed from early in their voyage a far cry from the woman who arrived back home. Thank you.
Photogirl1890 chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
I really liked this piece. There are some fantastic lines, particularly:

"She wished the uniform would chafe. It didn't."

"She wasn't sure if she wanted to laugh or scream."

"The pieces don't fit together. They never have."

B's thoughts about Tom and Harry are spot on.
beautyofsorrow chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Why am I just now finding your stories? You've got Torres down like I've never seen her in fanfiction before - raw, crackling, kinetic. Broken. At long last, someone who does complete justice to this brilliant character.

Thank you.
Juddysbuddy chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
You really captured B'Elanna's frustration at suddenly
being thrown into Starfleet. I especially liked the
silent interaction between her and Tom about the uniforms.
Also liked her conversation with Harry "Starfleet" Kim.
Thanks for writing!
CrlkSeasons chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Nice capture of the rawness and the tension coiled under the smooth surfaces during that early transition from Maquis to Starfleet. I wish we had been given more opportunities to explore these conflicting emotions on the series.