Reviews for Fifty-Six
js18 chapter 26 . 2/1
I’ve just finished reading this and loved it. Yes the Edward is very different, but summed up well by Alice in chapter 18.
If the haters changed this story from its intended path I say ‘bring it on’.
But haters – really. If I bought a book and didn’t like it I wouldn’t storm back to the bookstore and demand my money back and send hate mail to the author, I’d donate it and be out of pocket. If I borrowed a book from the library and didn’t like it I wouldn’t beat the librarian. If I read a fanfiction story I don’t like I STOP READING IT. I’m not out of pocket nor have I had a wasted trip to the library so get over yourselves and let people have the freedom to write what they want. It’s up to you whether you read it or not.
Keep up the good work Maxi, I’m just going to pop over to The Bad Vampires Handbook to leave a review there. xxx
Edward'sDJ chapter 27 . 1/21
Fabulous. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Edward'sDJ chapter 26 . 1/21
A well deserved HEA.
rubyblue9696 chapter 27 . 1/20
...i truely enjoyed this fantastically written story and character portrayals...wonderful...sensual, even in the gruesome...lovely...kiss kiss...

xxx jess
Edward'sDJ chapter 24 . 1/20
I'd be dismantling the basement, if it was me.
Edward'sDJ chapter 23 . 1/19
No complaining here...
rubyblue9696 chapter 12 . 1/17
"No, I most certainly did fucking not!" ...best line ever ...the inflection ...wow-uh ...love love ...

xxx jess
Edward'sDJ chapter 21 . 1/17
Can I bribe you to kill Jake?
Edward'sDJ chapter 20 . 1/16
I can't see any satisfactory outcome for the Jake situation.
rubyblue9696 chapter 5 . 1/16
...dumbfounded... *points to self*... you have taken a subject most of us here on fanfic have read on a few-if not numerous-times before, and changed everything... this chapter is one of the most beautiful chapters i have ever read... exquisitely worded detail and emotion...fuck(!), the view point alone is mind-boggling... i love it... thank you for writing it... kiss kiss...

xxx jess
rubyblue9696 chapter 4 . 1/16
...well then ...*shifts around in chair*...

xxx jess
rubyblue9696 chapter 3 . 1/16
this is just so refreshing to read... the tone... the vocabulary... the 'edward's talking to me' thing... fantastic... you've got talent my dear...mwa!

xxx jess
Edward'sDJ chapter 19 . 1/16
In good company if sustaining a life threatening wound.
Edward'sDJ chapter 18 . 1/16
I'm on tenterhooks, waiting for whatever catastrophe is about to befall Bella...
rubyblue9696 chapter 2 . 1/15
...i can't tell you how much i love your sentence structure here...the cadence of your words is very seductive, especially in your telling of edward's and the cullen's history, their gruesome lifestyle...very provocative...hypnotic almost as you draw us into this world...

...lol...and i have only read about 1/3 of this chapter, too...lovely...thank you...

xxx jess
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