Reviews for Fifty-Six
llabelle chapter 12 . 7/22
Such a great and complex story about accepting yourself and acceptance from others. And, so sad that Carlisle is so close minded!
MsLiss chapter 26 . 7/19
MsLiss chapter 23 . 7/19
No complaint!
That was awesome
MsLiss chapter 18 . 7/19
This story is so bizarre I can't put it down and don't know what to say
I really really can't wait
llabelle chapter 7 . 7/17
I love this story. Such a unique take on BDSM and the whole vampire mystique. Plus, Edward is so funny! Thanks for writing!
Bevey99 chapter 26 . 6/18
Great story, with a touch of everything. Fiction at it's best, thanks for writing.
Bevey99 chapter 10 . 6/15
Okay I'm reading this way after the fact. I just don't get why people have to be negative. Just stop reading - it's fiction.
The only thing that makes me crazy is when the story is good and there are so many errors, of every kind, that I just have to stop.
FYI, not the case here. Great story very well written.
jk chapter 17 . 6/4
and bella has no problem that hes been with thousands of women?
yaaaa right

bdsm isn't a excuse to be a whore and they don't usualy hook up with different people each time...I don't know why I kept reading really this story is freaking gross. I hate HATE this Edward..hes nothing other then a whore...he doesn't do anything except this...oh and he played the piano once...that's it whores whores and more whores for 17 chapters... im done
jk chapter 16 . 6/4
He knew all this time that his singer was his mate...and he said I'll look for her but I might as well have some fun in the meantime... he said that when he first joined the club

how could he do that? how could he be with all those people knowing his mate is out there? its not about the type of sex its the amount of people hes been with! why not just take one sub ya know not freaking hundreds of them!
hes so used freaking used up...such a HUGE WHORE I don't want him anywhere near bella! EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER
I really really really hope bella rejects his used up ass...hahaha literally his ass is used up! Hes been with men! I threw up...just now...
HE was with jssica fucking Stanley! puked again
sooooooooo nasty
jk chapter 12 . 6/4
he said

he want the girl and nothing else...(you sure about that whoreward?)

he didn't regret what he did (oh he should...its really really sad and gross that he doesn't)
he did 67 people in one month! men to!
and that isn't even his number that was just in a month! hes been at it for years! and he was a whore before that!
I feel sorry for the girl that falls for him...hes sooooooooo used up ewwwwwwwwwwwww
jk chapter 11 . 6/4
He wants to change her..but she wont have any good smelling blood anymore soooo whats the point of changing her? Just so he can stop craving it?

he is a gross whore and ihope when he finds bella...she doesn't want him!
I hope he wants her and she want to know how many women hes slept with...and when she finds out she thinks hes so nasty she just leaves and never thinks about him again...
jk chapter 10 . 6/4
for the record.. this Edward is fucking disgusting..hes nothing absolutely nothing but a whore and I don't want him to ever find bella
jk chapter 9 . 6/4
Edwards justgonna fuck his way back to bella? Is that what the fuck im reading?
jk chapter 8 . 6/4
why is his name 56?
EmmettRose chapter 24 . 4/14
Did he not give a name when he called Libby? And lo the fact he had burst into Jake's office the very day he went apeshit on Jessica? And what info on Bella's paperwork? she wasn't a member? If those recordings were found wouldn't they implicate them all? Since they had been the ones to take Jake out of the house the last time he was seen?

Reefed? I know it as part of a sail or to be high on pot so he reefed his jeans?

wow she doesn't go for much variety at all does she? same ole thing she done in Maine :\ The laying on the floor I totally don't get.

Wow,all they do is paly for sex? Never have tender moments. I don't like theat someone would choose to be submissive all the time. I like the fri nght to sunday afternoon and a wed nigh thrown in for good Measure This is the only part I truley didn't like about the story. Yes Bella is a Dom but not even Edward has had a loving non-sub relationship it sucks. Not to ever experience it would truly suck. I never get these relationships, I get that it makes the sexuel experince
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