Reviews for In Plain Sight
Mylisssa chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Eek! What an awful situation. I feel so bad for both Bella and Edward.
monicaalexr chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
continue please
I really liked it
darkdarc chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Why haven't you finished it
erika shoval chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
wow!Soo good! love it!
fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
It needs to be continued. Don't leave us waiting;)
Alterite chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
Such a sad tale! I feel for Edward mostly.
A. xx
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Now, there's a mess if I've ever seen one!
rubell chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
so up until now edward was allowed to carry on with bella while esme watched her kids? and now all of the sudden she has an issue with it?! and poor Bella if he becomes the governor she is trapped for sure! James must die, no way around that...
Nannyjojo chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Could there be more to this fic?
vampyregirl86 chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
hey now, i know there is way more to this story. so after the contest, i humbly ask you to finish.
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Well this was crazy! I loved the age difference between the two of them. Although I'm not particularly thrilled it's James as the husband. I look forward to this being continued after the contest!
tigger5600 chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
wow... I feel so bad for Edward :(
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Poor bella and Edward well she ever leave him update soon
TeamAllTwilight chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Thanks for sharing this, I am a hard sell on cheating but with the forbidden contests it seems the way the majority go.
debslmac chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
:) I hope you continue this
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