|Reviews for The Loose Ends Will Make Knots|
| willsonny chapter 12 . 4/27/2015
can't wait for the next chapter
| girlwithnotattoo chapter 11 . 8/4/2014
Oh man, I can't wait for the next chapter :D I don't know who I really want sonny to end up with. I think I'm leaning towards will. But I do like Brian too. Although, sonny doesn't really deserve either of them. He seems a little selfish. Keep up the writing, you do it so beautifully.
| Pedris2 chapter 11 . 8/2/2014
Sonny apparently unaware of what offers Will and what Brian. Sonny in this story is basically a whore and he deserves arrogant and stupid Brian. Will offers Sonny a happy life full of joy and especially family. Something like this is for Brian foreign.
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/1/2014
Wow...another amazing chapter. I so hope that Sonny chooses Will...soon.
| wecomiso chapter 11 . 7/31/2014
I really like this chapter so much. I can not wait for them to be together as life partners.
| willsonny chapter 11 . 7/31/2014
can't wait for the next chapter
| hurdedur chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
Wow, their are some really angry people commenting on this story. I didn't find anything offensive about this story or was led to any conclusion that gay people are incapable of having a loving relationship. I thought the story was really good and hope you keep writing, despite what some people are saying. You took the story line of Sonny, Will, and Brian waaay deeper than what DOOL was willing to do and I thought that was amazing. Also the way you convey emotions between characters is awesome. SO, PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
| Memyself chapter 10 . 6/27/2014
First and foremost, there is a guest commenter in here who doesn't seem to quite understand the meaning of acceptance. The person seems to think inferior of themselves, so anything you write is gonna offend them.
Secondly, oh my god ! Oh my god ! You are amazing! Your story is excellent! I LOVE the way sonny is portrayed! Soooo hot! I'm a brison fan too! Doesn't mean I don't like Wilson! I just love sonny more!
PS : Dear 'guest' writer,
Please, kindly, fuck off.
| rorihill chapter 10 . 6/24/2014
I am so happy you are back writing! I was worried that you would take the not so positive comments from others to heart! I'm a fan of your incredible word smithing and found Chapter 10 to be so powerful. It gave such great insight into the emotion behind Sonny 's and Brian's intentions and ultimate actions and non-actions in their seemingly simply, but extremely complicated relationship. Who hasn't stayed in a relationship for reasons they can't explain even to themselves, let alone to others. I've been in Sonny's shoes and it really wasn't until I read this update that I truly admitted to myself that I stayed way too long in a past relationship that almost affected the incredible relationship I'm in now. I think you've done an incredible job of capturing the realty of the perplexity love brings. AMAZING! Welcome back!
| joel.underwood.5 chapter 10 . 6/24/2014
Just completely re-read the whole story. You write all the emotions in this story really well. While I would like to read some promise in the direction of reconciliation; it is your story.
Before writing this, I read some of the previous comments. I congratulate you on your perseverance. I would never write . . . stuff like that. I would simply stop reading.
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/30/2013
We are all anxiously waiting for your update. We wonder how you'll continue to destroy our beloved characters (Will and Sonny). Will this be the last update or will you continue to drag it out even more?
Do you know that us gay men are capable of having long term, committed monogamous relationships? We are capable of being faithful to our partners. We even raise children together. *GASP* When we face obstacles or challenges, we work through them and not start fucking other men. *ANOTHER GASP*
We are so glad that TPTB at Days of Our Lives are committed to portraying two men (who are gay) in love, pursuing their careers, sharing a home and raising a child, and working through difficulties that they come across, but always remain a united front.
You are a stupid homophobic bitch who uses the written word to spew hatred against gay men.
FUCK OFF...FUCK OFF...FUCK OFF...
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/30/2013
A bunch of were talking the other day about how people who refer to themselves as BriSon fans or Sonny fans or even Freddie Smith fans or Brian fans are Will/Chandler Massey haters through and through. You are clearly one of these people. We have all read your comments. You all crawl out of your rat holes and spew your hatred as soon as there is any sign of conflict between Will and Sonny. You of course hide behind your story in order to spew your hatred. When someone makes a negative comment about your story, you dismiss it saying that it is from an "irrational" WilSon fan. You think you cover your tracks because you start your sentence with "I love Will but..." or "I love WilSon but..." You're not fooling anyone. We know...you hate babies, children, families, love, intimacy, commitment, because you think it gets in the way of gay men having sex incessantly, right? Isn't that the point of your story. You're bored with Days of Our Lives' portrayal of WilSon, because Brian is gone and Days took your OTP away. Awe...poor you. If you're bored, get a fucking life. STOP DESTROYING THE TWO CHARACTERS (I mean Will and Sonny) WHO ARE LOVED BY SO MANY PEOPLE AROUND THE WORLD.
Get it through your head. There is no BriSon because Brian and Sonny were never a couple. Brian is gone...gone...gone. WilSon and Arianna Grace Forever! May be WilSon will have another child - a boy through a surrogate (Sonny's biological child). You would love that, huh?
You and the rest of the Will haters need to get over yourselves and crawl back into your rat holes and stay there.
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/30/2013
This is some serious bull. I'm not surprised you wrote this fic though, given your comments about the show's portrayal of WilSon/Arianna Grace. Let's cut the crap. You are a homophobe, who believes that gay people are not capable of having long-term, committed, monogamous relationships or families/children and that we are all bed hoppers. If we want something to love, we should all get a dog, right?
You certainly give fan fiction a whole new meaning. People who write fan fiction are fans of the characters. It is clear from your fic that you're not a fan of any of the characters - Will, Sonny or Brian. It's clear you don't care about any of the characters, including Brian. At first, I thought you were a Brian fan, but I changed my mind based on how you have portrayed him in your story. None of the characters have any respect for themselves in your story, which means you don't have any respect for them either. Writers are often protective of their characters, and it comes through in their writing. In your case, your lack of respect for the characters comes through loud and clear. You have reduced each and every one of the characters to utter and complete screw-ups. You're using your fic to reinforce negative stereotypes about gay men, and hate on gay men, and in the process destroy two beautiful characters on day time TV that are loved and respected by so many people around the world (Will and Sonny).
Another issue I have with your writing is your portrayal of someone suffering from anxiety/panic attacks. If you're going to write about a serious and potentially debilitating mental health issue, for god's sakes, at least take the time and make the effort to research it. Your portrayal is insulting to people who actually struggle with it. For example, in one the chapters, Sonny wakes up with a panic attack and goes out jogging and runs into Will. When Brian comes home, he is turned on by Sonny in his sweat shirt and Sonny asks him to fuck him. You clearly have no concept of what it's like to experience a panic attack. LOOK IT UP! RESEARCH IT, instead of using it as an excuse to have your characters to have sex. I know...Sonny fucking away his problems is the premise of your story. Having a panic attack is more than just feeling nervous or anxious or upset. People who experience panic attacks often think they are having a heart attack. So, think about it. When someone is in the middle of a panic attack, the last thing they want to do is have sex. Just like, when someone is having a heart attack, the last thing they want to do is have sex.
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/29/2013
What a load of crap!
We all know that you are a Will hater who calls herself a BriSon fan. Actually more accurately, you're a Brian fan. Then again, the way you've cheapened Brian in your fic makes me think you're not a Brian fan either. I don't think you care for any of the characters.
There is nothing I hate more than when fan fiction writers use existing beloved characters (Will and Sonny) and destroy them, because they are too lazy or too stupid to develop their own characters.
DEVELOP YOUR OWN CHARACTERS AND HAVE THEM DO WHATEVER THE FUCK YOU WANT THEM TO DO.
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/28/2013
I'm betting you now have the ending to your fic. I have noticed a pattern with you. You always post a chapter(s) after WilSon face an obstacle. Clearly, we all know where you got the inspiration for this stupid fic. Brian the vulture showed up to get into Sonny's pants as soon as he found out that Will had fathered Gabi's baby. You posted Chapter 7 after Brian showed up and WilSon explained to get lost and T was going to set him up with his girl friend's brother, because the loser supposedly cannot get his own dates. Your latest update was posted during the when Brent showed up in town and started mocking, judging and criticizing Sonny's life with Will and Arianna Grace.
I'm betting your next update will come soon. It will be something along the lines of Gabi takes Arianna and leaves for NY. When that happens, Sonny will have finished fucking Brian and decides to forgive Will and take him back. Then, it will come out that Gabi killed Nick and she goes to jail. She will leave Ari with Will. At that point, Sonny will dump Will and run to Brian and they start fucking again (but he will be in love with Will and he will be thinking about Will when Brian is fucking him) and on and on and on it will go...
Anxiously waiting for the update.
As for the show, you were hoping that Sonny would dump Will when Will called him a bartender and told him not to make him choose between him and his daughter. Sonny storms out and into Brian's bed and they fuck and fuck and fuck...without protection (like another reviewer mentioned).
You must have been so disappointed when Sonny told Will that they would make it work "together" and he also told Will that he couldn't lose Ari or Will and what Manhattan needs is a Club TBD. Go Sonny. That's right - Sonny would do anything for Will, because he loves him, needs him, wants him, accepts him and his daughter. Their daughter.
We all know that you hate the baby. You want the Will, Sonny, Brian merry-go-round. Sonny going from Will's bed to Brian's bed to Will's bed to Brian's bed. Of course, in your stupid head, gay men are not capable of having long term committed relationships and raising children. Yeah - that would be boring. You think we are all bed hoppers. Yeah - keep reinforcing negative stereotypes about gay relationships. Good luck. Keep writing your stupid BriSon porno to make yourself feel better. I have a message for you on behalf of the gay community - fuck off...fuck off...fuck off.