|Reviews for Mikado In Wonderland|
| Noizchild Johnson chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
This is a nice short read for the morning. You have an interesting concept. To be honest, your title was what drew me in. (I too have "Wonderland" in my titles for my Durarara fics, but they are much twisted and darker. That's a whole nother issue, though.)
Anyway, you could use to combine some of your sentences to help the story flow better. You do have a couple of typos, missing comma, and words from sentences. (Reading aloud will help you spot them.) Uh... Celty's a girl unless you're going to do something with that later.
Other than that, your story has some potential.
| Lady of the Shards chapter 3 . 4/7/2013
Kadota the voice of reason.
| Lady of the Shards chapter 2 . 3/17/2013
Okay. Now you really have my interest. I was jus slightly curios before, but this has me caught.
| Lady of the Shards chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
You've got me curios.
| Isa chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Interesting first chapter. It well detailed and I'm looking forward in the next update.