|Reviews for End of Life|
| LilyAceThompson17 chapter 2 . 8/11/2013
Sad. That's the only thing I can say.
I enjoyed and loved this very much.
| KristieKremeBBY chapter 2 . 7/20/2013
This was great.
| Sonixawesome chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
I really liked this story, the way it was organized, the idea of how we got to see and understand Tomoya's thoughts, you did a REALLY great job.
However, I do think there's a little more you could have done. For example, you started with Tomoya's thoughts, maybe you could have ended with Tomoya's thoughts as well. Maybe you could set it up with seeing Nagisa. It might make it interesting if the last thing he saw was an image of Nagisa crying, devastated at what he'd done. If she'd been watching, she'd have just seen the one she loved more than anything give up on her account. Maybe a dream of speaking to her one last time, a glimpse at what he'd just done to Ushio, something like that.
Also, one thing I like to do is leave a link to a song on youtube to match the feelings of the moment. Any of the sadder songs from Clannad's OST would do perfect, and listening to it while reading such a devastatingly sad story would really help the reader get the full dosage of emotions this story could possibly offer.
Altogether though, great story. It was thought out, and I can just imagine that you were crying in writing it (I've done that once or twice myself). Thank you for posting this :D
| flashbak1 chapter 2 . 7/12/2013
This made me depressed. :(
| PopPunkRocker4321 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Whether Tomoya's character would actually commit suicide is questionable. This piece, however, was decently written, so good job.
| LilyAceThompson17 chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
This is so sad... :'(
I enjoyed and liked this very much.
| BananaRama101 chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
:o Oh...my gosh...
:'''''( Poor Tomoya...
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
This is so upsetting...
| Bright-Like-A-Diamond chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
| Stunning RKO chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
| LisforLawliet chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
SO MANY FEELS .really great job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
This was so sad. :c