Reviews for The Morteia Chronicles
Alex chapter 5 . 7/11/2016
Brilliant fanfic! I am looking forward for the next chapter
Kate chapter 2 . 6/18/2016
Wonderful story!
Guest chapter 5 . 3/26/2015
Superb chapter! I'm soooo waiting for another, when you're gonna post it?
Anna chapter 5 . 2/5/2015
Wow! A friend told me about your books, and after that i searched on your fb page, found posts with that wonderful story you posted a while ago (i've read and loved it ) aaaand i ended up on your site, where i found a recent post about this fanfic, and i googled it so here i am. I must say i'm stunned by this, this, this work of art. I'm curious about one thing: you said you't going to update this soon, but where's the chapter? I'm really hoping you're going to update this , it will be such a waste of imagination! I mean, this story has a huge potential, even if the chapters are so rare. I like it very much, as much as i liked the story available on amazon (this round i'm yours). I just hope you're going to write for this story too, and i want you to never give up on it, so please, try to write for this more, it's something unique about this that will not let me sleep tonight. Good luck !
Kate chapter 5 . 12/26/2014
Wow! I'm very surprised of your skills, i like the story so far, but i would like to know when you will update, it's been 6 months since you last updated it so i'm worried. My reader soul aches when i think you might have abandoned this wonderful fic. i just want more of Niko _. He's the ideal man! And with Joey he's letal. I hope he will get along with zack in the end, but i think they will never be this way...Please, update. Im really looking forward to know what niko and joey will talk about :3 (i'm dreaming about a kiss, but as i said, i'm a little too dreamy).
guest chapter 5 . 11/14/2014
please bring up a new chapter. i miss your fanfic. please.
John chapter 5 . 9/22/2014
Oh, come on dear author! Such a great story with such rare chapters! What do we need to do for you to give us a new chapter? To stay in one hand and send you a video? Or what? I'm sure you don't like to receive kick-butt reviews just to get new chapters. (I observed that you brought us a new chapter after you received such an review...twice, i guess). I hope you will reflect on this, and that you won't mind those reviews, write for this fan fic because you love to, not because of such reviews. I'm waiting for a response and a new chapter if possible. *I'm sure you don't want to upset your readers, but don't mind the kick-butt reviews anymore*
Natasha chapter 5 . 9/11/2014
Such a cute fanfic! I'm a huge fan of vampire knight, and i love this story with another adapted characters. Simply wonderful! I want an update soon, come on dear, we all want one. It's just to wonderful to keep us on a cliffhanger. Please update !
Guest chapter 5 . 9/3/2014
You know what's funny? I just found a few hours ago a quote about a man, and after that a found your fanfic. I'm so surprised the quote actually fits Niko de Luca and Joey. I will write it down after i will finish my review. It's a great story, original in its own way and i really enjoy reading it, because i love how you write it. Good luck forward. I can't wait for a good next chapter. The sooner the better please.
Here's the quote:
He wears the smell of blood and death like a perfume
There is fire in his eyes
And ice in his veins
But you love him anyway
For he is a star
Burning with the light of a thousand suns
(and your world is dark without him).
I will wait for a new chapter like it will be the last one. Please update . _
Mariana chapter 5 . 8/27/2014
Please update soon, i already miss your fanfic 3_3!
M.S chapter 5 . 8/21/2014
Please bring us a new chapter, this one was beyond words. Please, pretty, pretty please :(. Key bay
Guest chapter 5 . 8/19/2014
Wow, well, i just found your fanfic, and i m speechless. It s a wonderful work of art. It s a pity that you update it so rarely. I saw you are answering your readers questions, well, i've got one too: does niko know that joey was beaten by her father in the past?
I didn't understand it very well, english it s not my mother langue that's why i don t know if he knows or not, even if my intuition says yes. Your writing style is beautiful and at the same time simple and complicated. The last chapter was full of emotion, jealousy, love and worry. I just love your cliffhangers and the turn of the situation. I hope you can update as sooner as possible. bye.
Hanna chapter 5 . 8/16/2014
Omg, you updated! Thank you very much. It was a wonderful chapter full of emotion and power. I see you are showing us a little more of the characters personality with every chapter for example, i didn't know Zack can be funny. I hope you will update another chapter this month. Have a nice day.
Daniela Calliope chapter 5 . 7/17/2014
I couldn't believe at first when i saw you updated. I was checking your story everyday since the last chapter to see if you posted something new. Thank you so much :*! I really hope i will talk to you soon, it's been a while , hasn't it? Now, let's get back to the chapter. It really was intense, i felt like Niko was so nervous and jealous because Joey came to Zack and he found out that Joey actually kinda loves Zack. I was sorry for him, of course ( for Niko) because he actually became sad and it's visible that he was hurt by Joey's untold words. Now i wonder what our prince will talk with our little tiny princess 3. Sincerely, i'm sorry for Zack too, i pity him in a way, even if i don't like him. I hope he will get his happy ending ( not with Joey :)) ) .
I love the way you describe their feelings, so intense and clear, like you already know how they are feeling 3 . You're very talented, i don't know if i told you this , but you are . My heart skips a beat everytime i re-read your chapters .
Have a great day/night :* ! Miss you :d! I hope you can update soon :D .
shira-chan 3 chapter 5 . 6/25/2014
I hope you don't make her love Zack :( . I see something coming since Niko was reaaaaally mad, so jealous XD hope you can give us another chapter soon.
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