Reviews for When Tomorrow Came
Cayr chapter 5 . 3/10/2013
Im really enjoying the story! My only recommendation is also to break up the text a little more with paragraphs. Other than that, no complaints! Keep writing! I'm looking forward to reading more!
Sarahbob chapter 6 . 3/11/2013
Amazing! One of your strongest chapters so far in my opinion :) It was so tense, hope everything turns out okay! Love the fact that even in his drugged and pained state, Enjolras still wants to sacrifice himself for the safety of his friends. So realistic. Keep it up! :)
Sarahbob chapter 5 . 3/10/2013
Amazing! So glad you decided to continue this :) and i feel honored you dedicated this chapter to me, really!
I love the way you write the confused state Enjolras is in. Makes the reader feel the same way, very well done.
I am hooked! Keep going :)
Only thing I could say for criticism, even though its far from that, is that it sometimes is hard to read because there are little to no paragraphs.
But as I said, That can only count as the littlest of criticisms.
Keep it up! Really excited to see where you're going with this :)
Sarahbob chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Very well written!
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