|Reviews for SONG OF THE FOURTEENTH|
| Dana chapter 10 . 9/11/2013
Thanks for updating! It's important to have good detail, but it's also bad to drag things on; I think you hit a good balance in your writing. Please update again soon!
| YoYoIt'sAlessia chapter 10 . 9/11/2013
You did a wonderful job once more Chi-senpai!
the part with the sword was great I can just see Kira having this "WUT" face the entire time omg.
AND THEN THE OMAKE
I FELL OUT OF MY CHAIR
LAUGHED SO HARD MY STOMACH HURT
AND THEN SANG ALONG
| Christmasloot chapter 9 . 8/27/2013
FUGALARDEIS! I didn't realize I'd read all the chapters untill I went to tap 'Next chapter' *cries* You better update soon!... Please! ;; I love this story! It's very amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter! (PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOON! ;;)
| Z0mbieMart chapter 9 . 8/19/2013
Love this rewrite! :D I hope you can do more chapters to it soon!
| Sabet163 chapter 9 . 8/18/2013
Another great chapter! I really can't wait for more. Oh, and no need to apologize, school and being prepared for it is important, so take your time. :)
| AzureSkyTower chapter 9 . 8/15/2013
i love this story, i read some of the original, both of them are amazing!
| Panthershade chapter 9 . 8/11/2013
YES! IT'S BACK!
Sorry, had to get that out of my system :D
I'm actually starting my second Fall Semester tomorrow, so between the last two chapters my school semesters have ended and begun. I laughed at Kira's reaction to her giant kitty. I think I would have said a little more than "You've grown," but that's just me I guess XD As for animal-like akuma/monsters/characters, I tend to do that too. I've always found animalistic monsters to be a bit more cooler/scarier.
and the Loo/Lou and Telly/Tellie or however they spell it is the bathroom and TV respectively :D
| Trance20666 chapter 9 . 8/10/2013
just a quick comment.
i'm too tired to write more.
this is different.
the building didn't fall on Kira in the other story.
i love how your improving.
i would like to see more of the ponytail third Exorcist later on.
his name starts with a K?
i'm too lazy to look it up.
i don't remember seeing him much in the other story.
your doing great
please update soon.
| abritishbrew chapter 9 . 8/10/2013
OMG I am really loving this story! AllenxOc's are my favourite kind of stories and usually they aren't well written, but this one is amazing! Please update soon!
| Dana chapter 9 . 8/9/2013
Thanks for the update! I guess the skin disease is connected to her innocence, then? I actually didn't see that one coming.
| 99terminater chapter 9 . 8/9/2013
*sees SotF updated*
Welp, one thing's for sure, Chikita is BAD, /ASS/. And quite honestly that's all I can really say for this chapter. Seriously. TERM DOTH HAS NO IDEA. X'D
And although this is only very slightly SotF-related, I feel like I'll have to scroll through who-know-how-many pages of DGM Beta-readers to find people who specialize in characterization. My writing is fan-fricking-tastic, but I'm not one of those people who know everyone's mannerisms and could tell you how they'd react to something as easily as their creator. And as you don't have a BR, I'm gonna take a wild guess and say you're one of them! (Though I don't think you could do it off the top of your head like some people. omfg)
Also, how do you not procrastinate? I have so much WIP stuff, writing AND drawings (one of which being an SotF fanart), right now that if I were ever to stop and think about it I'd probably and crais under my oh-so-cozy blankets at how insurmountably high the digital piles are. Q_Q
(Well, at least I'm not Komui! X'D)
| Hetomi chapter 9 . 8/9/2013
| rainbowrunner01 chapter 9 . 8/8/2013
Thank you for finally updating. I was getting anxious for the new chapter.
Just got to put this out there, but you are an extremely talented writer and I hope you update soon :)
| XxAvengingAngelxX chapter 9 . 8/8/2013
Wow I'm SO glad you updated! I've missed this story! Wonderful chapter and beautiful writing, as always. And I have a random question. Is this going to have romance between Allen and Kira, or is it going to be purely platonic friendship? And by the way, my iPod died right when I finished the chapter and I had to hunt through the complete MESS in my room for the charger, just to review. So you had better be grateful! :D
Anyway, thanks for reintroducing D. Gray-man into my life, and good luck in college!
| Kaite1211 chapter 9 . 8/8/2013
Oh. My. Gosh. This chapter was truly epic to epic proportions (if that even makes any sense *sweat*)! Brilliantly written, to say the least! What was that voice in Kira's mind (if it actually is a voice) was it Chikita? Does that mean that Kira is her accommodator, or is it Kira's family in general, and Kira just happened to be in need?
Your response to my review was interesting... So Grampy is Kira's maternal grandfather? He hasn't been given a specific last name yet, has he? Hmm... This chapter has certainly left some things to think about...
Good luck with the next chapter!