Reviews for Intrusions of the Mind
tainted-tash chapter 8 . 10/5/2013
Someone as smart as Hermione probably knew he was in there.
tainted-tash chapter 7 . 10/5/2013
He's finally starting to get it!
tainted-tash chapter 6 . 10/5/2013
Ginny's always been a funny character!
tainted-tash chapter 5 . 10/5/2013
Four. Seems he still isn't getting it...
tainted-tash chapter 4 . 10/5/2013
That's three now... I do love Luna though :))
tainted-tash chapter 3 . 10/5/2013
Two for granger... I wonder who else...
tainted-tash chapter 2 . 10/5/2013
Men and boobs...
tainted-tash chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
So Draco is the first..
mama123 chapter 9 . 9/20/2013
Amazing story. Loved it.
Guest chapter 9 . 9/19/2013
Aww... :) Severus, you naughty boy! Lol
Phoenix-Fire-Queen chapter 9 . 9/16/2013
Funny cute and other words perfection
Inari chapter 6 . 9/11/2013
I lol'd "you silly sausage". Like the whole fic really, though!
Guest chapter 9 . 8/14/2013
Oh, Merlin! Was this happening? Was this actually really happening?

Her hands reached behind her and nudged against his rock hard erection. A jolt of pure pleasure shot through him.

Yes. Apparently it was.
LOL #1

It had been a while since he'd unhitched a bra. A moment's panic flared – could he still do it?

But he didn't hesitate and, holding her eyes, he brought his hands round to the clasp.

Yes, apparently he could still do it.
draco-severus-mmm chapter 9 . 7/21/2013
Given you had not finished Entrancing Wendy, I have a look and see that you have, indeed, finished this one properly. Woot! Loving it! Love the ending!

If I have one criticism of it it's that the line about when Hermione says, "Hard" and Severus has a think about it. I don't know; it just sort of took it away from me a little, but as ever, precious few criticisms that really, it can be overlooked.

Love it, as always... :-)
ghostlylove chapter 9 . 7/13/2013
Wonderful. Amazing. A different concept and I enjoyed that a good bit. Every character's thoughts fit them and the way they imagined Hermione seemed perfect, especially with Malfoy. You seem to have this incredible ability to write for characters, you really seem to grasp their personalities and can express them beautifully. I loved it.
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