It's brilliant. Hurt my head alot while reading jumping from scene to different time different POV try to add the figure to the description. But brilliant.

Thank you for your work.

Me encantoooo

nice fic

I love how you explained the Land of Iron incident. I believe Sakura indeed cares for Naruto as more than just her best friend/teammate, and she did what she could to prevent him from getting himself killed. I love the NaruSaku bits.

Honestly, the plot and storyline is really interesting, and I had fun reading to this point, but the random flashbacks are really getting to be too much. I can’t concentrate on the storyline because of the frequent flashbacks, and they mostly don’t make sense, so it makes everything even more confusing. I wish I had the patience to finish this story, but my head just hurts because of how this story is organized, so, regretfully, I’m gonna stop here. Maybe I’ll come back to this story another day when I can focus better. You have a great storyline going on in this fanfic. I like its uniqueness with the concept of the spinner, allotter, and executor and that there are so many worlds you are trying to portray through the flashbacks, but I would suggest organizing the flashbacks in a way that they don’t constantly interrupt scenes because this really broke my concentration as a reader trying to enjoy your story. Thanks for the story.

...well that was something

Love you work. But I still can't get over the fact that she didn't use her super strength to deal with the boulder then she wouldn't be having this problem

Why didn't she use her super strenght to deal with the boulder? Not to necessarily explode it into tiny pieces (which could possibly hurt others) but just to deal with it somehow...

I really want to know that, why sakura didn't break that boulder with her fist.
even after she caught she can break it with one hand.
and after Minato help her out why she is not healing her self.
I mean those are her strengths right.
I just feel like you are not showing her real strength.

I'm pissed she didn't flick that boulder to next week.

THIS IS THE BEST MINATO PORTRAYAL I HAVE EVER READ! TRUST ME I LOVE THIS STORY THO I CANT HELP BUT THINK THAT YOU CUT IT SHORT BUT IS PHENOMENAL ALL THE SAME! I WANT MOAAAARRR RAWR!

Im in love with your story the plot is enticing

Your story is well written so far. And realistic. I live for it

kimi is kinda mary sue huh

who are the fire sages anyway?