Reviews for The Weekend Visit
ttcub chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Ok all I got to say is this is hot. Please after the contest write some more of this story. I would love to see her getting DP.
FlightlessBirdje chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
holy shit... that was hot
please what happend the rest of the weekend?
do tell us...

for me this was / is the most forbitten
mandy chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
wow..they manipulated her into it...thats a bit underhanded. I love how Bella had NO IDEA he liked cock...even though he was all for her fucking him in the ass with a rubber dick LOL
married2thcoach chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Wow! I have to say this feels the most forbidden to me so far. Holy shit ,his step brother. You totally blew my mind and my jaw was to he floor the whole time reading. Totally kinky & wild. LOL.
snoopylover60 chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Eww...
freakybella chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Hot and kinky!
Tinsley Warren chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Whoa! I wasn't expecting that!

What a steamy story! Glad they enjoyed their weekend!
Mylisssa chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
I love your writing! Hot story!
southernpur-rica chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Jaysus that was fecken hawt!*fans self* Floved it!
raidershell chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
Would love to see how the weekend continues!
Barbara29 chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
wow, that was great!
Lost In Fanfiction chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
Very taboo :)
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Oh Jesus this was the hottest one so far! I absolutely enjoyed the threesome!
Mom23xx chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
OMFG...so fucking hot. This needs a second part...with her receiving on both sides!
rubell chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
omg! so need to stop reading 'forbidden' stories while at work on my breaks! i kinda feel bad for bella because since they were all together i would think the first time both guys would fuck bella since she is 'odd man out' with edward and garrett having already been together and knowing that they are good with being with each other...then again, i guess that gives us readers something to look forward too when whoevef wrote this hott as fuck story posts the rest of their weekend...
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