|Reviews for Life After Death And Betrayal|
| SeleenaMarieDragonMistress chapter 1 . 11h ago
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| Mistress Steff chapter 35 . 3/5
I love this story! It is awesome
| Trance20666 chapter 35 . 2/20
when you said Dark Hunter story
did you mean a crossover with Harry and the Hunter world?
| Trance20666 chapter 20 . 2/20
Aro is very greedy
with a wizard as powerful as Harry
and if they know of the wizarding world,
they will know who he is
of course he would try to get his hands on Harry
no one will be able to challenge him than
maybe James and Laurent will keep their word,
but Victoria will get jealous
and go to the Volturi
and as they are already afraid of the Cullen's getting too powerful
they will come to eliminate them
| Trance20666 chapter 19 . 2/20
Mpreg would be interesting
would the baby grow even faster with Harry's magic feeding it
Harry is so powerful
i think his power alone with help sustain the baby
and the it will grow not as fast
maybe even slower than the normal 9 months
and make the pregnancy not as dangerous.
| Trance20666 chapter 10 . 2/20
i think Harry's magic would stop him from fully turning
he will just get the perks of being a Vampire
without having all the drawbacks
(think hybrid like Renesmee, Nahuel, and Nahuel's three half-sisters, Serena, Jennifer, and Maysun)
and he's already immortal
so it's not like he even have to be turned
| Trance20666 chapter 6 . 2/20
i know he died once or twice while fighting the Dark Lord.
and he's Master of Death,
so he can't die
or as least,
he won't stay dead
why can't Jasper claim him?
it's both physical and mystical right?
Harry's very protective of his Godson
he wont let anyone threaten him
and i would think as Teddy is at least part wolf
that the wolves might try to help him
see him as some kind of kin
| dacotilana chapter 35 . 2/17
i reallyloved this story
but it might be that my hidden pervert is speaking but i was expecting more mature scenes. otherwise you could have left out the bathscene and labeled it T insteadt.
and i would have liked more privat jasper/harry scenes at the end
they didn't have to be lemons but maybe about there dom/sub /taking care of the other/letting him take care...
but still! it's a really good story :)
| Sakihinata chapter 35 . 2/16
that was a good crossover ;)
| Pyrane chapter 35 . 2/9
Thanks for this interesting story !
Your way of writing is a bit confusing, but you have great ideas :D
Loved how Alice and Edward were put together, that's very coherent ;D
See you around !
| sad sabrin chapter 1 . 1/31
| AquilaPallas129 chapter 11 . 1/29
It would be interesting if someone other than Jasper took interest in Harry; e.g. One of the wolves.
| JayIshtar chapter 35 . 1/28
I've just end your story, and then I decided that this story's too good to be read only by people who read in English. I can't traduce in all the languages but at least could I done in French...
The only problem is that I don't have your permission.
So, all this stupid paragraph could be summarized in:
Could I translate your story in French?
PS: Sorry if I did some mistakes
| belakqwa chapter 21 . 1/26
Okay, there are lots of mistakes in your story, I just can't hold it in anymore.
"non-magical wizards" - whaaaaat. Non magical wizards?!)) really! After this mistake I gave up and wrote this comment.
Grammar? Let's face it, you have problems with that and these problems are big if even I notice them (English is not my mother tongue). What about linking words that you refuse to use (mostly)? They can help you to make connections between sentences because it seems that in some places you just throw in lots of independent and not finished thoughts with no connection and continuity. About "not finished": you look like a speed writer and I just think you have to come back to your texts and reread them carefully, you'll see what I'm talking about. Do you have a beta? It will do your stories so much good! They are really nice but difficult to read because of grammar, wrong word usage and your sentence structure (linking words! They are the best!).
You are so much better than you were before (I know what I'm talking about I tried to read you once, one of your first stories, I couldn't, I pay too much attention to grammar and other mistakes and it annoys me greatly when I see them, especially when they are so obvious) I give you that! But I think you can be even better because you just have to pay pore attention to you texts! I love your plot lines and I would like to read you more.
The other thing that is quite annoying is your forgetfulness about different facts. You state one thing then you say totally another thing and then you say something absolutely different. You contradict yourself and it can be helped! You just have to reread your own texts carefully as I mentioned before.
I hope you'll read my comment and you'll take my words into consideration because your works can be not only numerous but also really great.
| PerSonNee chapter 35 . 1/26
I really love reading your stories! I love your style of writing, your ideas, the way you describe everything, I just love how you do it! :) Love everything!