... -blush- now i feel bad about that comment! lol, loved the scene!

-shadow

why don't u give a few slash scenes?! You could mark it in black as a slash scene then write it!

... going to finish reading, just wanted to stop a sec

-shadow

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I love this story! It is awesome

great story
when you said Dark Hunter story
did you mean a crossover with Harry and the Hunter world?
a Ash/Harry
or Z/Harry?
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Aro is very greedy
with a wizard as powerful as Harry
and if they know of the wizarding world,
they will know who he is
of course he would try to get his hands on Harry
no one will be able to challenge him than
maybe James and Laurent will keep their word,
but Victoria will get jealous
and go to the Volturi
and as they are already afraid of the Cullen's getting too powerful
they will come to eliminate them
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Mpreg would be interesting
would the baby grow even faster with Harry's magic feeding it
or slower?
Harry is so powerful
i think his power alone with help sustain the baby
and the it will grow not as fast
maybe even slower than the normal 9 months
and make the pregnancy not as dangerous.
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i think Harry's magic would stop him from fully turning
he will just get the perks of being a Vampire
without having all the drawbacks
(think hybrid like Renesmee, Nahuel, and Nahuel's three half-sisters, Serena, Jennifer, and Maysun)
and he's already immortal
so it's not like he even have to be turned
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Harry's dead?
i know he died once or twice while fighting the Dark Lord.
and he's Master of Death,
so he can't die
or as least,
he won't stay dead
why can't Jasper claim him?
it's both physical and mystical right?
the claiming
or bond
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Harry's very protective of his Godson
he wont let anyone threaten him
and i would think as Teddy is at least part wolf
that the wolves might try to help him
see him as some kind of kin
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i reallyloved this story
but it might be that my hidden pervert is speaking but i was expecting more mature scenes. otherwise you could have left out the bathscene and labeled it T insteadt.
and i would have liked more privat jasper/harry scenes at the end
they didn't have to be lemons but maybe about there dom/sub /taking care of the other/letting him take care...

but still! it's a really good story :)

that was a good crossover ;)

Thanks for this interesting story !
Your way of writing is a bit confusing, but you have great ideas :D
Loved how Alice and Edward were put together, that's very coherent ;D

See you around !

***Pyrane***

lovely

It would be interesting if someone other than Jasper took interest in Harry; e.g. One of the wolves.

Good Morning/Evening,
I've just end your story, and then I decided that this story's too good to be read only by people who read in English. I can't traduce in all the languages but at least could I done in French...
The only problem is that I don't have your permission.
So, all this stupid paragraph could be summarized in:
Could I translate your story in French?
Please?
Jessica
PS: Sorry if I did some mistakes