Reviews for Life After Death And Betrayal
Sofie Eolas Holmes chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
Like it :) Would have loved some dialogue between Harry & Carisle though… :)
wechard chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
Good story so far. I highly doubt that Jasper would be able to avoid Harry, because 1) Harry is his mate, 2) He has been looking for said mate for centuries, 3) he has the least control over his vampire instincts and they will want him to be close to Harry 24/7, and 4) Harry would just track Jasper down if he decides to try to avoid Harry. I wonder How Teddy and Jasper will react to each other.
AbbyRose24 chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
OMG, You have to update quickly. Even though it seems like I kinda already know whats gonna happen, you NEED TO UPDATE VERY QUICKLY! That is all. Good work. :D
DarkRavie chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
Another great chapter. This story just gets better with each posting. I can't wait to read what happens next.
The Four Element Song chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
I can't wait to see where you are going to take this. Oh, this is getting so good. :)) so looking forward to the next chapter.
alice22 chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
Jasper probably smelled Harry on Carlise and followed his nose to HArry. Esime will love Harry since he still needs to eat and will be with them forever.
Team Major Whitlock chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
I loved it, and I dont think that you should have Jasper and Harry avoid eachother x
Oogies4u chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
harry being master of death will know what happened .. but being him it will be a while before he will allow him to be claimed ;)
saranya1555 chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
Hi, it is good fic, continuation please
Lizzosaur chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
Aww, I love it! Harry's so good with Teddy!
felawred chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
Don't make them avoid each other, you're right that is an Edward move.
123claire123 chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
like it
Wicked Lovely 17 chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
love it. :D
TormentedGirl chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
I love it! The ending is perfect, I hope you update soon!
Dark Neko 4000 chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
who is the vampire that trap harry
what will happen next
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