| Reviews for Life After Death And Betrayal |
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   wandamarie chapter 5 . 3/21 thank you |
| wandamarie chapter 4 . 3/21 thank you |
| wandamarie chapter 3 . 3/21 wow getting good thank you |
| wandamarie chapter 2 . 3/21 getting good |
| wandamarie chapter 1 . 3/21 thank you |
| LeafZeo chapter 1 . 2/10 Im sorry, the old Chinese restaurant for 531,621.94? Have you absolutely no concept of money? |
| LillyTigress chapter 33 . 1/10 I can understand author's dissatisfaction with this chapter but I feel it's probably unwarranted. I'm not a real fan of Twilight so I am not familiar beyond the basics so most characters at the confrontation are unknown to me but I got the jist fine. Past evils were exposed and the bad guys got their punishment and Harry was awesome and his real friends were there for him. Fanfiction relies on a reader's familiarity with the characters but a lot of fanfiction is so good that it's enjoyable even without it. This story is that good. Plus I think trying to delve too deeply into the backstories that were resolved here would have been too much. |
| LillyTigress chapter 22 . 1/10 I appreciate when authors make some kind of separation for the smutty content. I often just don't feel like reading it and it's nice to not have to try and find where it ends so I can pick up the story again. So thanks for the warning on this chapter. This is my third time reading this story because it is just that enjoyable. Might be my favorite crossover HP/Twilight and there's some decent competition out there |
| Wow chapter 19 . 11/29/2024 The cullens can go fuck themselves. I hope Harry doesn't forgive them for threatening him |
| m.inglitz chapter 35 . 10/25/2024 Thank you for the story. I loved reading it |
| dhamann7878 chapter 35 . 7/30/2024 Second time reading this and just enjoyable as the first. I agree about the continuing going to school |
| Guest chapter 35 . 7/17/2024 good story |
| laelruin chapter 35 . 7/18/2024 This was a fun story! I really enjoyed it. |
| RK chapter 35 . 3/3/2024 This was great! |
| Lokiethegod chapter 35 . 11/5/2023 So not the biggest fan of twlight (the rabid fanbase turned me away but ive read all the books and seen the movies) but over all id give this Story a 8-8.5 out of 10 (84 out of 100 for those who perfer a tighter number). Characters are well written and feel mostly believeable. Mixing of the 2 worlds was done well enough to be passable. It does seem like one of those stories that would of been better if it was longer and more drawnout but it seemed like the author was losing interest and just wanted to give an ending, which im thankful for and theres enough left that the author can always come back and add a few chapters before this one. A good read for a slow day if you are looking to get though a whole story in one day. Thank you for writing and I cant wait to read more |