Howdy! I'm loving your story so far. When I finished the first chapter I thought, 'this is one of the good ones' and it hasn't disappointed so far.

Still, I've found some conflicting narrative. In Chapter 3 Harry reflected in how 'love was a thing she had yet to truly understand', when here is stated 'Harry had loved many people'. I'm assuming this means she's not known 'romantic love', but has experienced other kinds. That's the only way I found to accept everything.

Still it didn't make much sense till I stopped to think about it, so maybe you'd like to rephrase one or both apparently conflicting statements.

Cheers!

I loved itAnd I reeaaly hope for an update!
Good luck with Your baby

congrats about your baby if she is out already by this time I hop he or she is healthy

I love this story. Mainly because that the characters feel real. Tom doesn't just do a 180 because he see Harry for the first time, and Harry does fall for him at a single glance, something that grows as the story progresses. It's great there is actually character development here. The hope, the desperation, the planning, pain, worries, fear and most importantly the negative effect Harry's many dramatic lives have scarred her.
Ps please keep going.

I LOOVE IT

oh shit

Was not expecting that

holy shit

WOW amazing idea

really they could not sense him? or was it a facade

That is a bit fucked up, but awesome all the same.

Great job

WOW was not expecting that. loved it

keep it up

yessssssssssssssss