“Tom asked one eyebrow rose in question. He knew his expression was one that other called ‘roguish’ it usually went a long way in allowing him to manipulate women.”

Uhhhh… he’s 8

I keep rereading this fanfic. I love the concept you created as being the master of death being a curse. And it’s beautiful how the relationship between Harry and Tom developed. And it’s so fascinating how they plan to overcome the catastrophe that will come. Thank you so much for writing this great story! If only i could read thousand of fanfics written by you!

Hello! your story is amazing, and please don't stop because i love it.
I must say that I admire you, I mean, you continue to write after having children, and that only makes you a strong person

10/10

I was (again) re-reading this story and I realized in this chapter you've used us-style dates (MM/DD/YY) for a UK newspaper, that uses DD/MM/YY instead :)

During Albus's perspective in Ch.8, he refers to Harry as "She" several times. I think you were still stuck in Harry's perspective since Albus isn't aware that Harry is a gorl yet.

I'm am bit late to the venue but I loved your 't know if it's finished or abandoned or on hiatus but it was phenomenal. Was an angle I've never read before in the harry/tom arc and I'm seriously going to be on the lookout for more like this. thanks for your hard work and lovely well.

The thoughts here portray a philosophy known as Social Darwinism. In Social Darwinism, you rise or fall in status based on fitness to be there. You rise in status because you were fitter to be there than the people you surpassed. You fall in status because you weren’t fit enough to retain it. This philosophy was most prevalent in North America and Western Europe during the Gilded and late-Victorian Eras respectively. It tended to be held the ultra-wealthy as a way to explain their wealth, “I was the most fit for it.” Or, as robber baron/captain of industry, whichever you prefer, John D. Rockefeller said, “God gave me my money.” While this philosophy can often be true, there are always people that “fail upward” or people that are incompetent idiots at best, and malicious brownnoses at worst, move upward in societal, political, militaristic, economical, or corporate status through no actual skills or abilities of their own. These people only get to their position because they were dragged upwards leaving a ditch behind them or are so good at bootlicking they are able to ride the coattails of others. There are also people that have been so pressed down, they can’t even stand up before their life passes them by. Some need only a push in the right direction while some need a guiding hand to be great.

I read all of this and I have to say it was wonderful. It was a 9/10 which is wonderful to think about when it was just my personal preference on some parts that made it worse. Also the fact that while it could be considered to be complete I feel it ended on a cliffhanger since it doesn’t have an epilogue and some things weren’t wrapped up in a pretty little bow.

i cried when i realized this chapter wasn't finished ﹏

are u still update this stories?

I love this story so much please update soon!

I’m putting money on vampires but with magic!

I love this story it was a new twist for me in the whole time travel/matter of death thing. I do hope to be invited back into your world.

Guau, simplemente guau. Tu historia es increíble, no hay otra palabra.

Al principio dude en leerla, no me gusta mucho la pareja Tom/Harry, pero tu premisa era interesante y no me arrepiento en lo más mínimo de haberla leído a pesar de mis dudas.

Tu escritura es detallista y hermosa, tus descripción de las emociones de los personajes específicamente es magnífica.

Tu historia me dio una nueva perspectiva de Tom, de varios personajes en realidad, y la forma en la que construiste todo, en el historial de tus personajes, por qué eran como eran y como los fuiste cambiando, es, sencillamente, increíble.

Gracias por compartir tu escritura, disfrute mucho leyendo tu historia.