|Reviews for The Man Who Glowed|
| ryouko70 chapter 1 . 5/12
This was quite an interesting story. You did a great job at keeping the tense consistent. Too often I see people switch between present and past tense (many times within the same paragraph).
| TwasFair chapter 1 . 2/15
Just a few small critisms:
-After seeing a giant 20 foot glowing blue man shrink to human proportions, I highly doubt anyone would second guess he has the ability to teleport.
-In a world where 'heroes' are canon, Dr. Manhattan wouldn't leave a professional journalist gawking.
-I have never been a fan of first person writing, it's more a personal preference but it limits what the reader gets to see to a singular point.
-It feels weird to me that you were telling people what the character said rather than inserting dilalogue. It also feels a bit disconnected, like the series of events is too much "this happened" then "this happened afterwards".
Other than that, it was a decent piece of writing. I've seen worse.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Hi I'm a BIG FAN of your other series touch of a Dragon,and I was wondering if you could continue it.
| Utibe2002 chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Please go back to The Touch of a Spirit It was such a good story