|Reviews for Love & Friendship Games|
| Pug1998 chapter 19 . 2/9
Awesome story! I'm sooo Gonna continue reading. I started it the other day thought about it all night and finished it today. Well what you have so far! I was thinking if a bunch of scenarios! Lol but I really like how you show what it's like for a victor before katniss. Bc Suzy didn't do that and I was sad. And how spinner said its best to just step off the platform before the gong goes off. I really wish she took advantage of that. I know I'd be gruesome but awesome
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/17
This is a great story. One problem though. Since Peeta's an Everdeen, he would've taken Katniss's place as one who when sings, the birds stop to listen, and Katniss, since she's a Mellark, would be taking Peeta's place as the one who's a goner the first time she listened to his voice. UPDATE SOON!
| maya09 chapter 19 . 12/31/2013
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| Guest chapter 19 . 12/16/2013
I really love the way you wrote the four of them. it's amazing and it sticks to what their characters are like canon. I really hope you update and complete this story. it's awesome.
| mikimouse17 chapter 19 . 9/23/2013
I love this story! I hope yo u will update soon! Is that start of the games next chapter? Whats going to happen with all the people after madge? That was a bit confusing but i still liked it!
| andinify chapter 19 . 9/7/2013
Okay... again, past my promise. Sorry.
Okay... the first opening of the chapter: *jaw hit the floor*
Seriously? Okay I know about the phrase that love can make you stupid or become an idiot by doing idiotic stuff.. including this. Good God Gale I was completely surprised! Anyway the shouting of 'gadge' was a nice touch:D
Anyway, I was honestly a little bit confused about the angry mob in the square... why were they mad out of the blue like that? Their reason is still so vague to me :/
Oh the scene between Peeta and Prim! Awww that was sooo cute!
Ugh Katniss was being a total brat. I get it, though. Being from Town and all... but alas I thought she would be a little more understanding... maybe it's a lot to take in... anyhow I hope she'll get a enlightenment soon...
The games comin up, yes? Can't wait to find out what will happen next!
| EllRose chapter 19 . 9/3/2013
| Angel chapter 19 . 9/3/2013
Dang it I didn't see that coming. Love this story even more.
| Dendroica chapter 19 . 9/3/2013
Hehehe, he said Madge.
Obviously you know that.
Not quite what I imagined - but very nice, taking away the power of Snow's record of the kiss (at least, Snow can't use it as evidence of betrayal later ... ) and Gale doing his best to protect Madge.
Really interesting take on the scene back in 12. I wasn't sure Madge going to Hazelle was the best thing for her to do, but glad Spinner was there to help her, and that her friends from the Seam stepped up in her defense. This will put Madge in an awkward position... but at least she's safer?
I do worry a bit, if Snow has the kiss on surveillance does he also knows Katniss has gone to the woods? I'm still curious to see his designs for her.
So glad Katniss and Gale finally get to talk on the roof! You know we've all been waiting for it. Really curious to see what happens in the arena ... :)
| ShootingforWishingStars chapter 19 . 9/3/2013
Oh God...man...I feel extremely stupid now...I would've never thought of it going on like that...
AND IT WAS BEAUTIFUL!
I love how the crowd started cheering their names. It was extremely uplifting if I do say so myself!
(Inner voice speaks)
Whoa...why are you being all happy and optimistic, Outer-Self? You're supposed to rant and be all creepy and stuff. You're a pessimist. You have to complain about everything! It's your job!
(Snaps back to reality)
Uh...sorry about that. But you know, Inner-Self is correct. I'm supposed to kill all the happy thoughts and annihilate all the sunny-side things. Did that come out wrong or something? I can't really care about that anymore...
Am I killing all the good vibes? Sorry.
Too blunt? Well, District Twelve really is strict about who loves who...
Just throw 'em in a hole and let them rot and die...
Gory? Oh well, you're used to it.
But really, I think they're kind of overreacting with forming a mob and trying to torture Madge. Would you call it torture? Mmm...I would. Public humiliation is the worst thing in the world...in my opinion.
Yep, I'm bringing it to FanFiction. It's risky, but I need to learn to take risks...
PEETA! AND PRIM! Jeez, my tears and guilt are filling your water well to the top. Grr...
Don't kill them. 'Nuff said.
Is it wrong that I think that both of them should win, Inner-Self?
*Yes. Go back to saying that they should both die*
Well, you heard Inner-Self. Inner-Self doesn't like happy thoughts.
*You got that right*
Anyways, I can't wait to see how things will work out in the future...will they both get out and rebel or will Snow step in and kill one of them before one of them happens? Or...will he kill Peeta and Madge? Or Spinner? Or Finnick?
Wait, no, Finnick is too awesome to die.
Oh heck, just break my heart now and kill them all!
*Yes, good plan*
THAT WAS SARCASM, INNER-SELF!
Bleh...sorry about Inner-Self didn't have din-din yet.
Anyways...I want a Gadge shirt. Do you think they already made shirts? I want one.
Uh...back to the story:
I want to see how the friendship will work out between Katniss and Gale now. I mean, I think they feel closer now...oh jeez...you're going to make me cry!
Then again, the title of the story IS 'Love & FRIENDSHIP Games'. Yep.
Other than that, update soon!
(P.S. Sorry for the multiple one-lined/not in a paragraph sentences!)
| Tori chapter 19 . 9/3/2013
Gotta know who saw this coming? It's so good I could kiss you. Gadge chants awesome. Never thought I'd say this Im chanting gadge with the capitolites. Gadge gadge gadge gadge gadge gadge. Gale can do anything.
| NurseKelly chapter 19 . 9/3/2013
Well, damn! Did not see that one coming. Good job.
| ForFutureReference chapter 19 . 9/3/2013
I admit that, at first, my reaction was more along the lines of, "Oh ****. Bad Gale, BAD! Abort ABORT!"
Then it became brilliant. Especially utilizing his little penchant for Capitolites to ship. The chants of "Gadge" made me chuckle.
It's good to see everybody protecting Madge against the nasty mob, especially Peeta telling them off for their absurdly skewed priorities.
Is it bad that I imagined Bristel saying in a psychotic voice, "I'll ****ing cut you all!"?
A nice little motley crew of rebels is beginning to form.
Whew... That confession about the rebellion really cut things close.
Katniss' initial reaction made me throw up my hands and cast away any ideas of her seeing the big picture, but he got through to her in the end.
| KS chapter 19 . 9/3/2013
Yes he said Madge not Katniss.
| Vedastus chapter 19 . 9/3/2013
I'm falling deeper in love with this story with each new chapter. Incredible he said Madge Undersee. Now I understand why his plan needed so much consideration that he locked himself in his room all evening and night. I love the way he led (you led) Caesar exactly where he needed him - just like Peeta. I'm not surprised to see the mob reaction from the seam men in district 12. Poor Madge. Happy to see Peeta is alright and was there for Madge. Love Darius, Thom and Bristel. Really like Bristel's fierce personality. Two parts made me chuckle - the cries of Gadge and Bristel pulling a big knife. I suppose Gale and Peeta (or Katniss in the original books) aren't the only ones who figured out how to survive despite the circumstances. Wonderful talk between Gale and Katniss. Finally! Love the way you did it. Katniss is inherently rebellious happy to see that part of her character live on. Love that Gale noticed her rebellious streak in not showing the game makers her skills. Wonderful interpretations by all.
I love Gale the genie who can do anything.