|Reviews for Elemental Darkness|
| Darman700 chapter 21 . 6/29
I'm glad you're back bro hope to see another chapter soon enough D
| Spunder chapter 21 . 6/8
use xXx its easier
| PSYLENT E chapter 20 . 3/26
| Buffbill chapter 20 . 3/26
Hahaha! YEAHHHH! You are BACK with a vengeance! Very well done with the action, it was easy to follow, fun to read, and exiting to imagine! The "Dark Spyro" personality was actually really funny in an epic way. Again, I must say that I am impressed with your ability to harness and manipulate the feelings of the reader- I still have a little adrenaline in my system, but that might just be me engaging in the story too much like I do with every story. Still lov'n this fanfic man, it's original and very fun to read.
Look'n forward to more whenever you are ready!
| Mamaluigi24 chapter 19 . 3/13
I just found your story and I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next...
| graystripe chapter 19 . 2/28
your chapter is shorter than usual for the past several chapters...lol.
| Spunder chapter 19 . 2/25
hey if you think you can acheive something it wor doing 1,000 times over in other words if wana write more but not on elemental darkness you can start anew if you feel that way
p.s. Thank you again for a shout out previous flame joke still stands
| Folwod chapter 19 . 2/25
Why did you have to make Cynder die ? I hope she is just unconscious because I love Cynder too much to see her die :'(
| Buffbill chapter 19 . 2/23
Woohoo! Great start Man! Again, I love how you made the Hermit into an epic character instead of useless and creepy. And Then when Spyro gave his Dark self control I was like " Oh Man- Crud is gonna hit the fan!" The revelation that Glacia/Flake set up that trap for the Cheeta's was smoothly done. Then, that final line- The traitor Malefor is here!- you set up the next part of the story very well and i am so exited to read the utter devastation that Dark Spyro will wreck!
| Guest chapter 18 . 2/11
I love this book I was checking everyday for an update I will never stop loving this story so please keep writing
My flame joke: you like flames you'll love Hell
| Buffbill chapter 18 . 2/3
Hi Airchi! First of all, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR KEEPING THE STORY ROLLIN'!
I discovered this story around a week ago when looked at Unit-Omicrons favorite stories, so i decided to read it- and i was immediately hooked. Ever since then my girlfriend and I have taken turns reading chapters to each other. We love the personable and funny authors-notes, the story is fantastically brilliant, I can't even count how many times you've made us laugh and cheer for your characters.
And to show that we care, we tried to come up with an anti-flame thingy!
For those who would Flame this incredible author let me remind you of something- It was a beast of flame that caused Gandalf to fall, flame that caused Anikin Skywalker so much pain, and flame that will do all this to the one who supplies us with joy and entertainment, so just plain don't. Period.
Also, if you are interested I am available if you want more direct feedback on the story. I am in contact with a few other authors over PM and they ask me questions about their stories and characters.
Thanks again for coming back!
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/27
Flaming up a storm.
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/26
You know,I like that you brought back the flame jokes.
And I wish everyone should look at this.
| Darman700 chapter 18 . 1/27
Glad to see you back in action old brother of mine, it makes me inmensly happy to see you writting here once again :D, keep the good stuff comming bro I hope to hear from you soon and hope to see another update soon as well.
| Spunder chapter 18 . 1/26
WOW I mean wow dude best ever