Reviews for Elemental Darkness
ShadowPhoenix10 chapter 21 . 2/25
Wow. You left everyone hanging again?! Seriously?! What happened to Spyro?! Or Quake?! I’ma haf ta kick ya. I think we all deserve the next chapter here. I spent the past three days reading all one-hundred-twenty-one-thousand words of this, and it took all of my spare time, plus a couple hours past midnight. Even if this amazing book doesn’t have the audience it should, doesn’t mean that you should stop writing it. C’mon man! I hope you have the sense to come back. Otherwise, as I said before, I’ma haf ta kick ya.
Fredrik the astral dragon chapter 21 . 2/1
When is the next chapter coming?
Darman700 chapter 21 . 6/29/2016
I'm glad you're back bro hope to see another chapter soon enough D
Spynder chapter 21 . 6/8/2016
use xXx its easier
PSYLENT E chapter 20 . 3/26/2016
Buffbill chapter 20 . 3/26/2016
Hahaha! YEAHHHH! You are BACK with a vengeance! Very well done with the action, it was easy to follow, fun to read, and exiting to imagine! The "Dark Spyro" personality was actually really funny in an epic way. Again, I must say that I am impressed with your ability to harness and manipulate the feelings of the reader- I still have a little adrenaline in my system, but that might just be me engaging in the story too much like I do with every story. Still lov'n this fanfic man, it's original and very fun to read.
Look'n forward to more whenever you are ready!
Mamaluigi24 chapter 19 . 3/13/2016
I just found your story and I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next...
graystripe chapter 19 . 2/28/2016
your chapter is shorter than usual for the past several
Spynder chapter 19 . 2/25/2016
hey if you think you can acheive something it wor doing 1,000 times over in other words if wana write more but not on elemental darkness you can start anew if you feel that way
p.s. Thank you again for a shout out previous flame joke still stands
Folwod chapter 19 . 2/25/2016
Why did you have to make Cynder die ? I hope she is just unconscious because I love Cynder too much to see her die :'(
Buffbill chapter 19 . 2/23/2016
Woohoo! Great start Man! Again, I love how you made the Hermit into an epic character instead of useless and creepy. And Then when Spyro gave his Dark self control I was like " Oh Man- Crud is gonna hit the fan!" The revelation that Glacia/Flake set up that trap for the Cheeta's was smoothly done. Then, that final line- The traitor Malefor is here!- you set up the next part of the story very well and i am so exited to read the utter devastation that Dark Spyro will wreck!
Guest chapter 18 . 2/11/2016
I love this book I was checking everyday for an update I will never stop loving this story so please keep writing

My flame joke: you like flames you'll love Hell
Buffbill chapter 18 . 2/3/2016
I discovered this story around a week ago when looked at Unit-Omicrons favorite stories, so i decided to read it- and i was immediately hooked. Ever since then my girlfriend and I have taken turns reading chapters to each other. We love the personable and funny authors-notes, the story is fantastically brilliant, I can't even count how many times you've made us laugh and cheer for your characters.
And to show that we care, we tried to come up with an anti-flame thingy!
For those who would Flame this incredible author let me remind you of something- It was a beast of flame that caused Gandalf to fall, flame that caused Anikin Skywalker so much pain, and flame that will do all this to the one who supplies us with joy and entertainment, so just plain don't. Period.
Also, if you are interested I am available if you want more direct feedback on the story. I am in contact with a few other authors over PM and they ask me questions about their stories and characters.
Thanks again for coming back!
Guest chapter 18 . 1/27/2016
Flaming up a storm.
Guest chapter 18 . 1/26/2016
You know,I like that you brought back the flame jokes.
And I wish everyone should look at this.
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