|Reviews for Written in the Stars|
| reberebecca chapter 28 . 5/24
E' stato bellissimo poterla leggere questa storia.
Inizialmente ero titubante. Dalla presentazione sembrava diversa. Non volevo leggere una storia di tutti loro umani e Bella indietro nel tempo...insomma. Invece sì è rivelato una storia fighissima. Bellissima. Originale. Anche una Bella originale e credibile. Meravigliosa.!
| celajwhitney chapter 25 . 4/28
jacob, the asshole, got exactly what he deserved. his own selfishness in wanting victoria to kill edward so he could have her would never have worked. he deluded himself that she would forgive him for leading victoria to kill edward sealed his fate as far as bella was concerned. now that he is dead bella will show no remorse for his death. billy s just as bad as jacob for encouraging him to persue bella, even knowing he would imprint someday. he was going to sacrifice his "best friends" daughter to his immature son's lust for charlie's daughter? i don't think so, and if charlie ever finds out the whole truth i believe he would kill billy as look at him.
| Guest chapter 13 . 4/16
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| Bluenightgrl chapter 2 . 3/21
ok seriously, this always pissed me off. Alice and edward always dictate and manipulate Bella life. She practically raised her mom, mature role the bills were paid and was extremely independent. now its like she has no freakin spine and let's them walk all over her. no criticism on your story, just my opinion on their relationship.
| sweetsouthernsongbird chapter 28 . 11/2/2016
This story was definitely interesting. It almost felt like two separate stories, with the spirit journey in the middle.
| blb1000 chapter 28 . 10/25/2016
She's become quite the little devil at school. I liked seeing Jasper as the teacher. Great scene with Emmett!
Thanks for another wonderful story.
| blb1000 chapter 27 . 10/25/2016
Guessing she's missing the first semester at Dartmouth?
| blb1000 chapter 26 . 10/25/2016
Nice speech on the beach. B-)
| blb1000 chapter 25 . 10/25/2016
No Sue in the picture yet for Charlie...
| blb1000 chapter 24 . 10/25/2016
She'll have to cry for the loss of her friend eventually, even if he want that guy anymore.
| blb1000 chapter 23 . 10/25/2016
Oh boy. Didn't see that coming.
| blb1000 chapter 22 . 10/25/2016
Tough to pull anything over on Charlie.
| blb1000 chapter 21 . 10/25/2016
I liked their dinner at the Lodge. Nice that you didn't focus on Edward not eating.
| blb1000 chapter 20 . 10/25/2016
Love Rose getting in Charlie's face about Jake assaulting Bella.
| blb1000 chapter 19 . 10/25/2016
We finally saw his real proposal, disguised as practice.