Reviews for A state of indifference |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Let Rick stay, or have him blow up at school. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, I hate you again. That is one of the most evil cliffies I have ever seen and I've seen some doozies. Please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() This was an awesome chapter and I can't wait for the next update, but as a side note hasn't Videl seen the footage from the cell games with the(so called) blonde haired warriors?. I think that although she is fearful her nature to learn more about Gohan and her feelings and concern for him would over ride what you have her going through now(imo). Keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait, what!? No. NO. I refuse to believe it. This better just be Gohan's thought that its the end. My goodness. NO. This is not the end, NO. I'll be waiting for an update. (Please?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() At first I was like wtf do u mean "the end" but then I connected the whole "once upon a time" and story thing lol. But omg this chapter holy shit he finally told her. I actually thought he went over to break up with her for a second. I'm glad he did though and I'm also glad youse her reaction realistic unlike other stories where confessing you're an alien is totally normal lol. Anyway I'm really excited for the next chapter now, keep up the good work and update soon please :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() is there going to be more or is this the end because the story is relly good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope this isn't the end. So I say, I wish I hadn't read this chapter before the next one is out. Is she really afraid or was her expression more from something she realised at that moment. Or else what is she afraid off. Poor Gohan really is getting tortured. Well I'm going to anticipated the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That can't possibly be the end! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooooooo! |
![]() ![]() Please don't tell me that's really the end of it omfg I want more what happens next more chapters or a sequel maybe |
![]() ![]() You are so vile ... Every chapter you leave us hanging at the angsty part ... its frustrating... That i have to wait for another 30days for the next update... Update before new year ... Plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow incredible chapter! |
![]() ![]() Also you have yet to resolve the football championship side story arch. Lawyered. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if sharpner is gonna knock some more sence into gohan again...cause he would think having a half alien best friend would be awsome most likily. And probably talk to videl reasoning with her why he was scared. Am I right? |
![]() ![]() I hope this isn't THE end! This story is too good to end now! |
![]() ![]() Please add Sex Scenes! |