|Reviews for Train of Fortune|
| Evelyne-raconte chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Very good OS, I like it, thank you for sharing.
| Mom23xx chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
This needs to be continued! Love it.
| Erikajo chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
| CAngell chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Loved this! More chapters, please!
| jloveskristen chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
Loved it! Really really written.
| Twi-Mom12292005 chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Cute little tale, great job doll.
| Nessa19 chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
love this! I hope it gets continued :)
| cherryhilz chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
I love this! I hope you continue this story! I would love to read more! :)
Thank you for sharing!
| archy12 chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
Nice one!Sometimes it does happen that we meet the right people a bit late,but what matters is to not let them go.:)
| mauigirl60 chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
Well, I can definitely tell you are not a US writer but I don't know exactly just who you are! Time will tell! I hope you will continue this, I'd love to see Edward's history and how he disentangles himself from his own marriage.
| Dutchie La Rue chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
This is one-shot is something else! Let me tell you I hope that you extend this into a multi-chapter work! I love this storyline and I love your Edward and Bella and little Ben! I can't stand Mike or Kate, even though we don't really get into Kate...but can it be that because of Mike's jealousy...he could have been having an affair with Kate behind both Edward's and Bella's backs? I would love to read more and more of this love story build and unfold and all that they have to conquer and overcome to really be together and what kind of job and life Bella is able to create for herself and then with Edward and little Ben. More More More and more steamy lemony goodness for these two, especially with the all talented Edward! Sa-weet! ;)
| Deia1721 chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
OMG, what a panty-wetting lemon! Who doesn't love a sexy, dirty-tallking, DILFward?!
Thanks for sharing and good luck with the contest!
| Tinsley Warren chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Aw loved it!
I feel like this could turn into a multichapter. I feel like stuff with mike aren't resolved yet because he was being too calm and I wonder what Kate will do. I wonder why Edward didn't divorce her before. Hmm questions.
Really great story!
| whiti chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Thoroughly enjoyed this story from start to finish. Too bad I'd just voted before I read this one as I would have included this story as one of my votes.
| Mylisssa chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Loved this. Bella and Edward really complete each other and Ben is too cute!