Reviews for Hypnotic
Atha chapter 20 . 1/2
I don't know what to say... I think this plot has potential to be a great story. In some parts, I got excited reading it. But my disappointment is toward the ending. I think you should try to built the emotional aspects in more detail, slowly so we the reader would feel the sadness also the regret deeply so we could cry.

I'm glad I read this. It adds another perspective for the movie. Thank you for sharing it. I hope your next story would be better.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/11/2017
not the reaction i was expecting. and i certainly don't have the tiniest bit of sympathy towards stoick the fa... vast.
ArthurShade chapter 20 . 11/24/2016
A sad but excellent story
Tekie Scythe chapter 20 . 8/24/2016
no, I totally wanted these feels!
CalypsoTheL0ver chapter 20 . 5/24/2016
Damn, that was SAD. But, what if they both turned into guardians after this? That would be a cool sequel. ;)
Zoha Ven chapter 20 . 3/31/2016
No . . . NO! Why oh why . . . I'm crying, your stories are just so good - you should write a book someday, you know? Thank you so much, your stories are truely amazing.
Guest chapter 20 . 2/24/2016
He...they...die- *sobs.* wow that is a different ending then the movie but I still liked it.
Volixsis chapter 20 . 11/30/2015
it's just, so, SAD! ! !
The Shadow Fright Dragon chapter 20 . 10/18/2015
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OH SHIT.
YOU KILLED HICCUP AND TOOTHLESS! WHY?!
The Shadow Fright Dragon chapter 19 . 10/18/2015
TOOTHLESS! NUUUUU! DON'T F****** DIE!
The Shadow Fright Dragon chapter 18 . 10/18/2015
Or, time for him to show you what HE can do!
The Shadow Fright Dragon chapter 17 . 10/18/2015
Yup, go kill that thing, then leave your father. He doesn't deserve you.
The Shadow Fright Dragon chapter 16 . 10/18/2015
F****** TAKE A KIFE TO THE HEART STOICK! OH WAIT, I FORGOT! YOU DINT HAVE ONE!
The Shadow Fright Dragon chapter 15 . 10/18/2015
Kill Toothless and I kill you.
The Shadow Fright Dragon chapter 14 . 10/18/2015
DUN DUN DUH!
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