|Reviews for The Envelope|
| X-Chick303 chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Very nice! You have some grammar problems and you forgot to capitalize every now and the, but otherwise it was a very good start for the story! It was so funny! And am I correct to assume this is post-timeskip?
| Smile-Evily chapter 5 . 5/18/2013
I am bawling like a baby...I love the story! Update soon!
| crazycarl364 chapter 5 . 5/15/2013
Great chapter. I kinda like both Usopp's parents had planned an arranged marriage for him and Kaya.
Just kidding! All joke aside, you did a very good job on the last few chapters, and I can't wait for the conclusion.
| Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 5 . 5/3/2013
-wipes tears away- Beautiful... Depressing and sad, but beautiful.
| xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 5 . 5/2/2013
Awww this chapter was so sad!
| Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 4 . 4/1/2013
Good ending. Even if it's a little angsty, it's a good place to cut the chapter off. Update soon!
| Katzztar chapter 4 . 4/1/2013
I like the idea of both Yasopp & Banchina meeting at some school. I get the impression that tis not in Syrup village or on Gecko Island though. I remember from earlier chapter saying Usopp was born on a different island, is that where the school is? Or is it on Gecko Island but a different area than the small Syrup Village? And did Usopp end up boing to the school as Banchina wanted? It says they go to school until 18 here, but Usopp met Luffy when they were 17. So if he went, how long was he there?
| xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 4 . 4/1/2013
I really enjoyed this chapter!
"What've I done?" Awww I feel bad for Yasopp! :(
| Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 3 . 3/25/2013
-shrugs- Maybe it's a left-over fear from before he got his devil fruit. Or he was just overly traumatized by the War of the Best. Hear a gunshot and think, "Oh God, are we under attack?" Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm guessing Yasopp doesn't know his wife is dead? I'd think that would be one of the first things he'd ask Usopp. He'd blame himself for being unable to get the medicine or help her, and Usopp would beat him out of it. Update soon!
| Katzztar chapter 3 . 3/24/2013
Luffy & bullets it was first commented right before Usopp joined, when Luffy, Nami & Zoro met Gaimon. Gaimon had shot at Luffy, and Luffy says he doesn't like bullets, even though they don't harm him.
| crazycarl364 chapter 3 . 3/24/2013
Oh, thank Beejeezus Usopp's alive! You had me worried for a second with the last chapter. If I haven't said it before, this story is fantastic! Its obvious that you put a lot of thought and effort in to it. Plus, I feel you really captured Usopp's personality in this. Its nice to see Usopp's smarter, more sophisticated side in a story instead of bein a screaming coward like he is in some other fanfics.
I hope your fever goes down soon, and don't try to rush out the next chapter if you're feeling really ill. I'm sure the other reviewers will understand. Get well soon!
| mks 12 98 chapter 3 . 3/24/2013
Why would anyone who's scared of rubber be afraid of getting shot! -_-
Well, he survived! :D
| Anzhela D Asura chapter 3 . 3/24/2013
Yay! Usopp isn't dead! Ahhh but you're killing me with the tension! Please update soon :)
| xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 3 . 3/24/2013
YAY! Usopp! :D
I can't wait to find out what are in the letters! :)
| Anonymous Lady chapter 2 . 3/22/2013
Well that was heartbreaking... Liquid pride. Liquid Pride.