|Reviews for By chance|
| MargaritaS chapter 11 . 8/11
interesting, wouldnt the last names be thorson and lokison?
| Heart of the Flaming Sea chapter 11 . 8/8/2016
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| Shinningstar1998 chapter 11 . 6/18/2016
Lol Gabriel is my absolute favorite character from Supernatural!
| Shadowy Kitsune Alchemist chapter 11 . 4/21/2016
awww so cute... Pretty good story. adding it to my fav list.
| RavenandDragon chapter 11 . 3/31/2016
this is my second time reading this story and still injoyed it,
I hope u can do a sequel if not a one shot of the future?
| randomplotbunny chapter 11 . 10/8/2015
| Femnaruxsasulover chapter 11 . 9/3/2015
thor and teddys daughter's proper last name would be thordottier and loki and harrys son would be lokison
| JiinxTBM chapter 11 . 8/26/2015
Wouldn't it be Thordottir and Lokison? Or Teddydottir/ Harryson, because the girl would have automatically been a dottir due to being a "daughter". All the last names in Norse mythology (well normally) is built up by the fathers name and a suffix which would be son for a 'son' and dóttir for a 'daughter'.
| miranda ann chapter 11 . 3/29/2015
The proper names should be nymph thordaugter and Gabriel lokison (just thought you should know);-)
| kirsty21 chapter 11 . 2/1/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/24/2015
| QueenOfTheives chapter 11 . 12/8/2014
hehe i like :D
| vampygurl402 chapter 11 . 8/31/2014
Do more loki/hp fics please!
| Mokushi Ryuu chapter 2 . 8/20/2014
If english is your second language I applaud you for the credible attempt. If english is your first language, I would suggest getting a beta to have a look at this to see if they can't. . .polish it a little bit.
| alex forester chapter 11 . 7/24/2014
really like the story is there a second part or is that it