Reviews for When Legends were Young
Pumpkin Kuro chapter 13 . 8/31/2013
Update soon please!
Babycakes22 chapter 13 . 6/30/2013
great chappie it was nice to hear a little of ai longs personal life cant wait for the next chappie plz update son :D
tuckeyhunger99 chapter 13 . 6/30/2013
Thank u for putting a new chapter up.
Poor aoi long and her family i hope they find her brother.
When will everyone know about shifu past
update soon plz:-)
Rabenkopf chapter 12 . 5/24/2013
the movie is coming :D

a lion as specialist for Chi techniques ;-) original :-P

Fenghy :D This will be a nightmare for all her life :D

somehow so much details about the fight are not necessary, looking against who they fight *sweating emoticon*

When this Furious Five would be so good in training like they are in inventing cool names for attacks, they would be Masters already :D

Hmmm...wil Dao play a role in the movie?

Till next time :-)
bombymcgee chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Nice writting! I'm very impressed by the vibrence of your character interactions! This is a great read!
tuckeyhunger99 chapter 12 . 5/20/2013
Good chapter:-) but i really am getting excited to find out about shifu past
Babycakes22 chapter 12 . 5/20/2013
hahaha fengy that never gets old bless her ;) aww ime gutted this fic will be over soon but... bring on the "movie" ;) loved this chappie it was nice to read about one of the five learning something new and new characters :) plz update soon :D
Rabenkopf chapter 11 . 4/29/2013
"Yun immediately realized that he hadn't talked to Yun in a long time..." need I tell more ;-)

honestly...somehow you use Yun's name a little bit too often ;-) a bit variety would have been better :-)
example:
"Looking back as well, Yun saw that there were also some people behind them. Yun of course grew somewhat suspicious right away. Yun immediately told Xiao to climb onto the carriage and Yun himself started walking closer to it."
Four times Yun in one phrase ;-)

Wings of Justice...Wings of Justice! The technique of Crane :D Will Yun soon also say Ka Ka :D

He Guo Village? do I know it?

What?! A Noodle soup better than Mr. Pings?! Yun seems to be under the influence of feeling too much like a hero thinking that ;-)

A Rooster is going on Vacation ;-P to summarize this chapter :D

Till next time :-)
tuckeyhunger99 chapter 11 . 4/28/2013
Good chapter :-)
Rabenkopf chapter 10 . 4/19/2013
nice list of ages :-)

Shi-Shi? :D

eh isn't it in total six children? two older sisters, one older brother, Ai Long, one younger brother and one younger sister?

"And he said that it reminded him of someone?" Ai Long asked. Fenghuang nodded. "Maybe he knew the guy who sold you this?"
Fenghuang shrugged. "Or maybe he knew someone who owned a similar medallion?"
The two girls continued for a while without talking. The thing with the medallion still appeared strange to Fenghuang and she couldn't help but wonder what connection Shifu might have had to it – or whatever else the case was.
"Wait, do you think that maybe Shifu knew the guy who sold you this?" Ai Long asked as they continued down the stairs. "After all, he said that it reminded him of someone – the medallion, I mean."
- don't you repeat yourself here?

nice philosophical excursion here :D Fenghy - this nickname will never leave from now on :D now only Shi-Shi needs to accept his :D
Babycakes22 chapter 10 . 4/18/2013
aww loved that chappy so cute! ;) waw simple question simple answer didnt see that coming lolz ;) hmm i wonder if weal here more of shifus past coming up in the future... plz update soon :D
tuckeyhunger99 chapter 10 . 4/18/2013
Aww that was so cute i loved it. I really want to read when shifu tells them about the medallion
tuckeyhunger99 chapter 9 . 4/16/2013
When will shifu tell fengheng about the medallion plz tel us
Babycakes22 chapter 9 . 4/16/2013
hmm so thats how shifu felt a chill last time memories much awww poor feunghuang plz update soon :D
Rabenkopf chapter 9 . 4/12/2013
a past mixing chapter...hmm let's see if there will be consequences ;-)

""Don't worry, I will," Fenghuang said, forcing up a smile. Jufeng suddenly caught her in a deep hug. At first she was surprised, but eventually she hugged him back." - reminds of Po and Tigress hugging, don't you think? ;-)

"Friendship… Had that really been all there was the whole time? At some points, Fenghuang had her doubts, yet why would the doubt even be there? Jufeng was her friend, now he was married, she was a part of the Furious Five and that was it. But still… watching Jufeng and Meihua together, made Fenghuang have her doubts." - now you understand TiPo :D

for being young Shifu behaves like his older self already :D

""Guys, what are you doing here?" Fenghuang asked." - I think this question was not needed :-) After all Shifu was there moments ago and the village is not so big ;-)

"why hadn't she just asked for help?" - yeah why? :D

"That was unexpected," - the right words o.O

When will Shifu reveal the thing with the medallion?

All in all the chapter was less confusing than the other and the most important spots of the plot were connected :-) Although I ask myself if this was the last meeting between Jufeng and Fenghuang...after all he lives in the Valley now ;-)

till next time :-)
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