Reviews for Illicit Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() GR! your fond of cliffies, arent you? not cool! lol but awesome chapter all the same... i cant wait for more! ((PLEASE! Dont make the next one a cliffie! lol)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excelent story! I start reading it over at fiction alley, then came here. You cant just leave a cliffie like that! That's so mean. I want to know what happens! I love your story! It is different from most Lilly and James stories. (Most being either them hating each other hten figuring out they really love each otehr or them being madly in love with each other then getting together with basically the same plot in every story.) But I do have to say that your thanks you's take up a lot of room. For some chapters it took almost have of the chapters length for the thanks yous.. Maybe for the ones you dont say anything to, just list the names, you could put all together... Anyway! Again, Love your story and I hope to see an update soon... Bye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very Very Good. I am extremely impressed by the quality of writing this is. I loved that James and Lily aren't involved in a love/hate relationship. That's over done. But your take on a loving but tumultuous courtship between the two is exicting and refreshing. Especially with the escapades of James' father, etc. Honestly, kidnapping! Oh and one further note, I noticed you mention something about proffessing love at the age of seventeen in another chapter, I couldn't respond then, but i certainly will now.I don't think that it is ridiculous to tell someone you love them at a young age, but it is incredible stupid to do so after knowing them for only a short while. Yes, I believe in falling in love at first sight, but it is only an attraction, chemistry if you will. You may feel a strong connection with someone before knowing them and later realize you love them, but that realization takes time too. Love is such a strong emotion. So strong, that I hate the way it is thrown around so carelessly (not in this fic, but in so many others). You don't say I love you in order to ask someone out. They would laugh, notice you're serious and become scared. Anyways, I'm ranting now so I'll leave you be to finish the next chapter. AND SOON! mandy~_~ |
![]() ![]() In Chapter 9, "“All right, all right.” James stood and thanked Mr. and Mrs. Potter for the wonderful evening" Instead of Potter, it should be Evans. I really enjoy this story, i will now continue on, :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! You are so going on my fav. authors list cos this is one of the best fanfictions i have ever read. Keep up the good work! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG FINALLY! I WAS BEGINNING TO LOOSE HOPE! I think I will go back and read the entire thing just to refresh my mind about it all! You are still my all time favorite author! This has made my unhappy horrible day all better. Ive missed your chapters ohh happy happy happy happy! Well I cant really type anymore, but i changed my sn in the time you were gone, after i basically stalked you with reviews!Well becuase i loove this story still... anyways its IrishDancer, actaully its on fictionpress and if you are bored... if u like fantasy, that is cuz thats what it is. so blah blah blah blah blah...hehe Ill stop now.. much |
![]() ![]() you must be from colorado lol... my friend was there visiting her brother (he goes to CC at boulder) and she couldn't get a plane back because of all the snow lol really really hood story! Write more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting chapter! im so glad you updated! D kinda seems like james and lily have a romeo and juliet thing going on..hehe they're in a relationship but its not approved of...make sense? lol anyways...keep writing!:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome job in writing this so far :D but...ack! that was an evil cliffie...hope to see more soon ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...it took you long enough! No I'm just kidding. It was worth the wait though! What an elabourate twist! How exciting! Maybe it is her FATHER *plays Start Wars music*...dumdumdum... oh well...we shall see...Keep up the wonderful writing! As Always, Canadiangal P.S. You wouldn't happen to live in New Jersey would you? Or wherever New York City is? Sorry. I'm horrible with the American States, beign canadian and all. :( |
![]() ![]() Hey, i just wanted to say, that i really like your stories! however, i do not have access to the chapters: Bahama's, baby or Dinner with the Potter's. If you could tell me a way to view these chapters i would love to hear from you, as you have probably figured out that I really enjoy reading your fics! Any possible way to read these two chapters would be much appreciated! Bye! Jamesanlilyforever PS I really LOVE this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, do you live in Frazier Park, CA? Anywho, I love all your stories and now that cliff is going to make me think about who it is all throughout school! Great story and hope you continue soon...! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! You're back! Fan-bloody-tastic... I stumbled across your stories, and I love them to bits and bits, and I've been checking EVERY week to see if you've updated, and this has made my day. No, my month. Actually, this has to be the best thing thats happened ALL YEAR! I'm so super glad you're back! As for the state-thing, I did hear about that there was lots and lots of snow in America, but, I wouldn't have a clue what state. I don't think I even know more that five states of America~ so I don't think I'll have a guess... I'm so happy, and excited... Love ya lots and lots and lots... Tez |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, sorry, i know its been a while, i kinda got grounded from the computer...anyway, this is a really sweet plot twist! do u have the whole thing planned out or are your just going along with it and seeing what u feel like putting in? |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! YOU UPDATED! I know. I missed getting your review replies...I always like it when authors do that... Oh! You missed me! That makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside! HEHE! I'm in England till July. Yeah...the whole living thang... I like it, but I long for good television and some fellow Third Eye Blind obsesses! I also miss Target. I don't know why, but that Diary Queen and GOOD Pizza Hut are things I miss terribly...(they have CRAP Pizza Huts over here, how can the British people stand them? Of course they can just go to Italy) Babbling...I have a habbit of doing that... Anyway, to bussiness, VERY interesting chapter. This Josephine personage sounds like an interesting character...a moron? Morons are interesting! They have to be smarter than we expect inside...somehow... Lily and James must make up! Sirius is FLIRT! AW! I'm dying to find out who "a voice" belongs to and what's going to happen! Is Lily's Dad there? UPDATE SOON! The Minnesotan in England gnome girl aka marzoog PS. I changed my pen name, what do you think? |