Reviews for Illicit Love |
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![]() ![]() OMG you HAVE to update soon...also what abt falling into grace? Im a big fan of the falling trilogy and puh-leeze update that soon! I know your having writers block but the best thing to cure it is 2 sit infront of ur PC and start typing...thats what i do when i have writers block. Also if that don work then try reading over your story that helps 2! BUT PLEEZE DO NOT ABANDON FALLING INTO GRACE! Ok anyway i LOVE this story and i hope you update soon! The ministers daughtertrouble...update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() CONTINUE! It's great, I want more. |
![]() ![]() can i have the potatoes? |
![]() ![]() Yeah, Aragon is hott. Legolas is kinda girly, though. Aragon is noble and awesome. I thought Legolas kinda acted like a jerk when preparing for the whole Helmsdeep thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah well...your story is so great, that I just decided to add it. Well James and Lily have gone through the barier of Remus' "times of the month", but they seem to have another obsicle. Poor them! I think I'm too full right now to take any leftovers, and besides my grandma is one of the best cooks in the world (in my and my family's opinion), so I'm usually TOO full. I LOVE Aragorn. I kept scowling at that one Rohan chick who was eyeing him. If I can't have him, only Arwen can. He belongs to her anyway...::sighs:: I love Sirius so much that my friend occupationbwitch, who is writing a Marauders fic, based his love interest off of me. HEHE! I begged her to do it. I also love Jamsie so much when I wrote my only 2 L/J songfics I kinda based Lily off of myself...HEHE! I love book characters too much, is it any wonder I'm a geek? Well happy writing and Holidays! The Minnesotan in England, who is in Minnesota for 1 more day in her alotted week, marzoog |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh good! Free leftovers! Like I hadn't had enough, eh? ;P So anyways! This story is going really well, and will be put into my favourites list right now! Yay! Ok - so yes... Legolas is hot. Too hot for words sometimes. Hell - half the time, in substitute for words, it's just mindless drooling. Oh well - all the better to watch the movie. Quieter that way, eh? So yea... um. Thanks for putting Canada in your story! Don't know if you're from there... but it seems as though no one knows about us. For example: Independance Day (movie), all major cities are attacked, and listed. None in Canada. Hell everyone! Come here and you'll be safe! Nothing here but igloos, bears, moose, beavers, dog sleds, inuits, snow, trees, and the occasional Canada goose. ;););) I love it - I really do. Anywho! Great job - and yea! I hope you do post again soon - this story is just too good! Hope you had a Happy Christmas, and have a Happy New Year if you do not post before then! -Lamina Court |
![]() ![]() Update quick1 I can't wait to see what happens :) The story is quite amusing, and I'm dying for another chapter! |
![]() ![]() Update quick1 I can't wait to see what happens :) The story is quite amusing, and I'm dying for another chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() GREAT STORY! James is being such a stupid moron and lily DESERVES better |
![]() ![]() That girl has only said two words and i already don't like her. Anyway, nice chapter, it resolved things but then opened up a pandora's box! Update ASAP so i can find out what happens next. Ooh, and I want anything chocolate from the leftovers. |
![]() ![]() *GASP* Cheesecake! I'm honored. I LOVE cheesecake ALMOST as much as I love your story. (And believe me, I love cheesecake a lot.) Back to your story, wow, it has been a long time since I have read this superb writing, where have you been, stranger. I read chapters 11 to 13 and they are great. I like how you did the love scene; it was extremely tasteful, nice cliffie for 13. Overall, I am very impressed. There are SO few truely (oops my English teacher would kill me) good L/J fics out there. So many are done in bad taste or are (forgive me) just plain stupid and unrealistic. (If you want to read another good Lily/James pairing, try Crossroads by Emmyjean, it is beautiful.) Well, I have to get back to my homework. It's still break and I am swamped. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas! Amour, Ma'hi |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gasp! Isn't that the girl he's engaged to or something? Uh-oh... Now Lily's truley going to be pissed. Oh, shit... Write more soon! |
![]() ![]() I just absolutely LOOOVEEE this story! Its so unusual! |
![]() ![]() I love your stories! Especially this one. I can't wait for the next chapter, so get typing. NOW! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You can't stop there! Please add the next chapter soon! I want to see what happens next! Keep up the excellent work! :D |