Reviews for Illicit Love
AnnaMel chapter 2 . 10/14/2002
Sirius' father is brazillian? That's very cool... I mean, I'm brazillian and I loved the idea.

Well, I just wanted to say that I really liked your fic...

Keep writing, always!
pilikika chapter 10 . 10/14/2002
You wouldnt know how happy I was today when I went to and looked to see if Illicit love had any more chapters, Thrilled thats what! Big smile plastered on my face. The only drawback was It didnt have a lot of Lily/James stuff, please get some of that out, I would love you forever and ever and ever and ever and ever and...yeah you get what I'm trying to say... I think it's awesome how you gave Remus a werewolf mate,he totally deserves it,the french was good too...Are you taking it? and James on the puddlemere united! Well that was kinda expected, as the book refers to James being soooo wonderful at Quidditch, but Warner brothers completely screwed and made James a seeker in the movie, I mean what is up with that? I mean really, James WAS a seeker wasnt he? Please tell me I'm not going mad... I love wasting review space on stories I absolutely love. But now I think I'm just going on and on and on, but hey it's fun for me! So please make some more romance in the next chapter, that would be totally brilliant! (right up there with ritz bitz sandwhiches w/peanut butter (brilliant invention those were, I luv them! my favorite junk food, lol)) You must think I'm a little bit mad..Guess what? I am! Ha Ha Jk I am perfectly sane, but maybe not after weeks of not having more "illict love" so get some more out SOON!

always,

Pilikika
iluvoliverwood1 chapter 10 . 10/14/2002
Yay! Another great chapter! Girl, you have to get your butt over to the PGU and Thorn&Buck, becuase you haven't been to either place in FOREVER! Anyway, I lurved your chapter, and I wish it had been longer!
Jess the Great chapter 10 . 10/14/2002
Oh, ho ho ho! A TIME TURNER! :turns back to the 19th centuary where all them men where hot, curitious and charming...: ANYWAY! Lovley chapter as always. I can't wait 'till their last year! I want to be a Sirius Groupie. Or Remus Groupie. Or both. .~ Write more!
uknowwhoslittleprincess chapter 10 . 10/14/2002
great chapter! wow u liked my joke well heres a nother one:

Q: what does a fish say when he hits a concrete wall?

A:Dam
Emily Woodmark chapter 10 . 10/14/2002
awwwwwwww...I can't wait to see what happens! And I hope Lily doesn't have some wimpy job like some stories do, that really bothers me.
Zetta chapter 10 . 10/14/2002
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

Sweet and awesome as always. Will send you a longer review later, but my mom's standing right over my shoulder.

AWWWW! :o)
marzoog chapter 10 . 10/14/2002
OOOOOOO! Do I get to dance with Sirius?

At first I was afraid, I was petrified

Kept thinkin' I could never live without you by my side

Then I spent so many nights thinking how you did me wrong

And I grew strong

And I learned how to get along

And so you're back from outer space

I just walked in to find you here, with that sad look upon your face

I should have changed that stupid lock

I should have made you leave your key

If I had known for just one second you'd be back to bother me

Go on now, go walk out the door

Just turn around now

'Coz you're not welcome anymore

Weren't you the one who tried to break me with goodbye?

Did you think I'd crumble?

Did you think I'd lay down and die?

Oh no not I, I will survive

For as long as I know how to love, I know I'll stay alive

I've got all my life to live

And I've got all my love to give

I'll survive

I will survive

Hey hey

::stops when she realizes everyone is staring at her::

THat chapter was awesome! I like how you made up that Pierre dude!1 He was cool!

Stinky Peter! He should have just been a plumer, then the world of harry potter would be much happier!

I just wrote an HP fic, no one has reviewed it yet, sad::sniffle::

Well, i like living in England, but I'll be thankful to go back to Minnesota for high school at the end of the year. Europe is so overdelveloped.

The Minnesotan in England

marzoog

Ps. THanks for answering to my reviews, very few authors do that!
Ma'hi chapter 10 . 10/14/2002
Ooooh! I am so going to be one of Sirius' groupies. May I have a bright green disco outfit? Please? I loved how you went into Remus and Peters' lives too, not just Sirius, James, and Lily. It added a lot of flavor. So sad, it's their last year at Hogwarts, but oh so exciting too. I know you'll have some great new adventures in store for them. Update soon!

Have I ever mentioned how much I LOVE Paris? Thank you for mentioning it in your fic, it made me very happy. J'adore tes histories! Au revoir, mon amie.

Bonne Journee!

Amour,

Ma'hi
Ma'hi chapter 9 . 10/14/2002
Oh! I'm so mad. You have two new chapters up, and I haven't read either one of them. Thank goodness it's MEA. Did you know your fic doesn't come up under the fanfiction search? I try it all the time, and it never works. Therefore I have to search through all the other fics to find yours. (Grrrrrr...) Alright, enough of my moaning (and grrrrring). This chapter was great! I looove Jessica. Quite a few authors portray James' family as sweet, loving, and perfect. Yours is so much more interesting. It's so nice to see someone be creative. Thank goodness for the truly good L/J authors out there. Great chap! I must go on to read number ten.

Toodles!

Ma'hi (2)

I just love your fic!
Agent Idiot chapter 10 . 10/14/2002
*dances* *dances a bit more* Oooooooo! You've no idea how happy I was where I read your dedication. of course, had to do a double-take (and triple, and third...) but when I realised it was me I was so pleased! Thanks awfully, and no, I'm not embarassed at all. *grins around* Anyway, enough of me grinning. That has been known to be dangerous.

Wow! Very very very good fleshing out right here. I like Pierre's little bit... But now I awnt to know more about him. The Pierre and Hannah story, hows that? *g* Funny, I've always had the urge to jsut run off and travel and leave everyone behind. O.O Peters family bit was lovely too, specially the bit about him changing the world some day. Lovely foreshadowing.. Does that apply? I don't know... just wanted to use a lovely long word. _ James' family, then: Nice, very nice. I can really see Rhien fitting into the Very Rich Spoilt Lady stereotype and it's interesting how James is thinking of how to manipulate his family.

His in Puddlemere United! GO James! *waves banner*

Remus wants to be a vet! Woot! That is so ironic and cute and sweet and lovely and PERFECT. Connects the whole DADA thing too.

Um.. Gods, this is another long review... Look what you do to me! *g* Why do you have to be so good with names? *wah*

Replies to your replies to thier replies (hehehehe.. love that) Doritos n chocolate are nice. Trust me on this. But then, chocolate and anything is nice... *looks around* Did someone say Thorn and Buck? I was there... Havn't been round in about a millenia tho... I was official 'person who bonks sharks on the head with an inflatable candy cane.' Yup. Thats me.

Disco outfit! Woot! *bounces* Thx again!
ooh chapter 9 . 9/29/2002
nnext chappie please! disgustin food.. who knos about boys!
iluvoliverwood1 chapter 9 . 9/26/2002
How. Dare. You...leave me with a cliffie! Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, my computer's still broke, so I'm behind the times! Anyways, it's fantastic, I lurve it, and who is the guy in the green dress robes?
UnforgivenChild chapter 9 . 9/26/2002
NO! Not a cliffie! thats so evil! hehe but i liked the chapter... its kick ass... cant wait for more!
UnforgivenChild chapter 8 . 9/26/2002
Ohh! I like this one! its really good... sorry it took so long to review... my comp was in the shop.. but it was a great chapter... on to the next!
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