Reviews for Illicit Love |
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![]() ![]() awwwww how sweet how sweet i wanna c who mr green is! hurry and write more. o wanna here a joke? its a great one ok here it goes: there was a lady who was moving into this big house and she said the first thing she saw on the tele she would name her house. so she turned on the tele and saw a big hairy gorrila's butt so she called the house 'hairy butt'. after a while she got lonely and got a cat and said that she will name her cat the first thing she sees in her house. she walks inside and sees a big crack so she names her cat crack. after a while the cat gets lost and she calls up the police and says "help me help me ive looked all over my hairy butt and i cant find my crack!" lol thought u could use a good joke |
![]() ![]() Yep, I'm Minnesotan and I go to school near London, but my parents work there! Talk about 24/7 supervision! England is cool, just crowded, and if you need some London Geography just ask me. Cool, I want a Marauders map! ANd a Channeling locket what ever the heck it is! But I think I'll pass on the restruant, that sounds discusting! Great chapter! Sirius snogging Jessica, HEHEHE! Update SOON(the word that is non-existant to most fanfiction authors) THe Minnesotan in England marzoog PS. THanks for responding to my review! |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy crickets! lol, as always that was a great chapter. I can't wait for more, keep up the awesome job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() grr! This cliffhanger has to be karma! I give my readers cliffhangers a lot and grr your doing it to me! Noooo! Gilgamesh is okay, what you have to watch out for are the words, ppl have weird names like, Utnapishtim, Enkidu...it's crazy! Good chapter...This story is turing out very nicely! The Queen of Angst, Majestyic }- |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate cliffies! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, I'm reviewing, but, please, don't give me Marauder's Muck Mix... As *scrumtious* (sp?) as it sounds, I'm... err... too full on chocolate. : ) Thic chapter was just lovley, and I'm anticipating to see who that person is in the long cloak! Is it Severus? Now, you must excuse me, I've got to get more chocolate... : p |
![]() ![]() ![]() well well, and who might that be? hmmmmm...no idea...i think i will add your story to my favorites now...its is very much needed, its the least i can do, of course, ANYWAYS, want to try reading my stories? i will answer that for you to save you the trouble. no. one of them is just weird and i have loads of trouble with, and the other one, well i dont actually have a plot yet, *bows her head in shame* yes yes, i am very sorry, i will think of one soon, i promise! anyways write more soon, i know where you sleep...actually i dont...but my sister says that to me all the time when i dont worship the ground she walks on and polishe her shoes with my tongue for all i care, so dont worry, not a freak stalker here! i just like that saying, my friends always creep me out with stuff like that, sorry but i am over horrified of the quotes "Hello Clarisse" and "I'll never tell..." they scare me to death, at about the age of 10 i finally got over to my sisters i know where you sleep comment, i mean it was really scary to me when i was little! oh well i better go soon...*sighs* anywhere write soon...god i dont know if i have EVER in my life written a short review,i dont believe myself...tsk tsk tsk tsk...you know what? my brother must have brainwashed him, i know am listening to all his music A LOT, i am in a New Found Glory phase, just out of the Third Eye Blind phase, really and now i am VOLOUNTARILY, meaning no threats, black mail, deals, bribes, just burning him CDs. just like that...and he thought that his fiance was manipulating me, if she is so bad than why did he get engaged to her huh? actually katherine is great, she is really nice and she used to model (so did my brother but they actually met after they both happened to quit their modeling careers because of not caring for the life style, at college) was miss teen pennsylvania, is now trying out for miss pennsylvania again and might make it, then going on to miss america, too bad she was raised where her parents are divorced, daddy means monthly check, other daddy means moms newest boyfriend who just happened to buy her a mercedes for her birthday (march) after her mom had got her a brand new eclipse for christmas, and where she only gets the best, my poor brother, as much as we all love her, she is a bit on the materialistic side...OMG! i tell you! i always do this! it starts out as a review and i end up telling you my life storry! and the funny thing is i just thought about what facial expression i have and what i should have and i probably should be laughing but seriously i am staring blankly, i scare myself sometimes, oh! listen, do this to your teachers everybody! ok stare at them blankly like "could this get anymore boring" and when they look at you quizzicallly, just smile really wide for them and then they look at you like "mental i telll you, this child here needs help" its SOOO much fun! ok once again i am telling you nonsense, it is the never ending review! reminds me of the neverending song and the neverending story, of which i remember neither, ok this is driving me insane i really need something to do other than, no offense leave review that take like a hour to read, its cruel i tell you, very cruel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, another chapter. Hmm the guy couldn't be Ludo Bagman could it ? Didn't he have a crooked nose? Maybe not. I haven't read GoF in like a year so i tend to remember stuff that wasn't even in the book. Anyways... Write more soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're very welcome. One thing though. ! There. That should be enough! |
![]() ![]() plz add soon. i'm slacking off in school because of yur story and cuz u're putting 2 many cliffies. plz you have got to add more ASAP |
![]() ![]() ![]() its so sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You just had to leave it there didn't you? PLEASE UPDATE SOON! You have to get the next chapter out soon! |
![]() ![]() Love your story. Can't wait to see what happens. Please keep writing. |
![]() ![]() This is a really good story! I love your describtions. I'm not good at them at all. You are a really talented author. I hope you post more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooo, that was like, sooo great! I wanted to read all 8 chapsies b4 I reviewed, so here I am. I looove the idea of my Sirius being half Brazilian, he's just soo cute (Ok, I admit it, I am a 14 year old girl with a rare case of crush-on-a-fake-character disease). Um, btw, brazilians DO know what pizza is, I casually loooove pizza and I live in Venezuela, a small country right over Brazil. Ooo pleeeeeeeeez read mi ficcies, I don't hav much audience... oh vell ill go bak to me coffin ;] ellie |