Reviews for Illicit Love
Ma'hi chapter 8 . 9/10/2002
I love Lord of the Rings; my friends and I always joke about the whole "my precious" deal. Gollum's so cool. Anyways, super chapter, I'm excited to see what's up your sleeve. Thank you so much for the realistic portrayl of Petunia, some authors have her as this really weird, cruel, well, I don't know how to describe; it's just not as good as yours. I glanced over your notes to Elenora, I really love how you said you "like to take people aways from reality for ten or fifteen minutes." That's just what we're all trying to do here.

Update soon (I know it's hard, I'm already swamped with homework!)

Amour and Bulles,

Ma'hi2
sTaRgIrLeLLiE chapter 4 . 9/9/2002
its soo cool!

oo oo read my ficcie pleeez!

:] ellie
Nasha L. T. M. Potter sorry i'm not signed in chapter 8 . 9/8/2002
My preciousssssssssssssss! *evil cackle* Um, sorry... You are now on my list of people I find annoying for two reasons. 1) You have not finished this fic yet. 2)This fic is so good that I am up at 11:54 PM on a school night and I don't have my homework done and I don't care because this fic rox! grr... If you're not to busy signing autographs for your adoring fans, could you drop me a line when you post the next chappie? Thanks!
Argentumlupus chapter 8 . 9/8/2002
hmmmmm- Turhtfully- I'm a little dissapointed, I just read through this piece to chapter eight. I suppose I was hoping for more action- as I am what can only be called, a devouted fan of your "falling" series. But this is a good piece. I haven't read what the general populace think about it- I'm a bit curious though. I like it- you have good grammar and word useage- but it seems to be almost lacking something- maybe a side plot or something... I'm sorry- I probably seem rather offensive, I'm not particularly one who reads Romance, so this is a bit different to me. I hope though- if you enjoy writing this piece as much as it seems, write on!

-also: sorry- I haven't reviewed your "Falling" series lately, I've been lazy.

-Also agian: I love your small wizard inventions- it's great to see people add thier ideas to the wizarding world.
Britz1 chapter 8 . 9/8/2002
Lav,

Don't mind me. I decided that 'Lav' is easier to type, so you're now Lav. You'll deal with it lol. Well, it's official. You've made my Favorite Story list! Yay for you! I checked off the little box at the bottom, so I'm not lying. If it doesn't turn up, it's 's fault, not mine. So, congrats! I love this story, it's one of my all-time favorite L/Js.

ANYWAY! I loved how James arrived & scared them all...I can just imagine the look on certain peoples *coughcoughPETUNIA* faces if they saw that...ever stop and THINK about that? Like, all of a sudden thsi person steps otuta your fireplace? Odd picture, ain't it? lol :)

Wow. Charles Damian Potter works (sorta) with MUGGLES? Have you *mentioned* this fact before? If you did I feel stupid, but that's odd. I loved the whole Lily/James scene...lots of snogging! lolz. I really did like that though, so...more? Please? Pretty please with a cherry on top? No, I take that back, I don't like cherries...hm...pretty please, as pretty as your purple toe shoes? lol. In any case, I loved that whole scene. The whole owl thing was hilarious.

I'd like to add that for a Writer's Block chapter, it was TERRIFIC. When I have Writer's Block...which, unfortunately I'm suffering through right now with one of my stories...I just don't post, so I'm SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO happy you're posting. Oh, and you went to LAS VEGAS? I'm jealous! My studio (for whatever reason) doesn't do competitions any more, which is sad. I actually just ordered new jazz sneakers and tap shoes today. My ballet shoes & lyrical strappy-shoe-thing fit, but I need new pointe shoes too...hmm...I'll have to go beg...lolz. Oh, and I like your made-up motto thingy lol 'It’s not a sport, it’s an Art with Attitude' That's funny...and cute lolz. _

Oh, and I have a request. Is there any way you could stop by and check out one of my stories? I have an L/J (the writer block one) and (in my opinion) a better one that's post-Hogwarts Harry. I'm also writing another story that hopefully will be up soon that's about an Unspeakable...but at any rate, I'd be SO happy if you stop by and drop a line to let me know what you think. I'll love you forever! If you can't, no biggie, but I'd really appreciate it. Again, brilliant job, and POST SOON!

Luv ya, Britz
Pickle Princess chapter 8 . 9/8/2002
Yaaaaay! I've always wanted a Channeling Locket, ever since I read the falling series! thank you! heehee great chapter, keep up the good work. and dont worry bout the writers block, i get it all the time... It'll go away someday... lol
Pumpkin Juice chapter 8 . 9/8/2002
lovely; positively smashing
Clavel chapter 8 . 9/8/2002
Oh cool chapter!

Read you later, Im in the run!
C Jazz chapter 8 . 9/8/2002
Hee hee! This is such a wonderful story! I love your descriptions of everyone and...I love these quotes:

"I'm half Irish, half Brazilian, and a whole lot of sexy!"

"and- get this -it was used in a game where it was thrown, then hit with a thin, long club, and you ran around in circles to get points."

Hee hee! I hope you continue this story! It is just plain beautiful!

Bubbles and Glee!

-Jazz
TiniRini1 chapter 8 . 9/8/2002
I love your story! I love the idea and everything tht you have created for it. I almost cried during chapter 6. *looks around and blushes* Im such a sap. Dont tell anyone! lol! Well I love it keep writing!
Meghan chapter 8 . 9/8/2002
This is really great! Please continue! I love this!
Calypzo chapter 8 . 9/8/2002
It wasn't bad. I liked this chapter. We just need "more" of the chapter P. Write again soon.
martini addict chapter 8 . 9/8/2002
OMG! I have not abandoned this fic! Just didn't have time to review. School is starting for me, UGH. But I really liked both chapters. This one was nice and sweet. I wonder what dinner is gonna be like! And that's so funny how they got mounds of letters. I really wanna channeling locket and a marauder's map. I'm so excited now! Post your next chapter ASAP!
Megan Lisay chapter 8 . 9/8/2002
That was a really great chapter! I absolutely love this story! You are a very talented author. I don't say this to many people, so pay attention: I think you shuld look into writing as a possible career choice. You have a natural talent for keeping even the most normal of things interesting.
Guest chapter 8 . 9/8/2002
I was still doing my h.w. until the day before school I got back to school,my Homeroom teacher didnt even collect it!

You should update more often and add more all.
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